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Bro do Barabara. I have never seen a fanfic w Barbara.

I honestly thought the same, but it seems fine for now

Luv it, I will say by giving Yufeng the dragon bloodline she will probably turn into a heaven defying genius which is cool.

Yo check out this new fanfic that I just uploaded: Common Sense in the Wizarding World Marauder's Era SI/OC https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13791036/1/Common-Sense-in-the-Wizarding-World-Marauder-s-Era-SI-OC I want some feedback and would really appreciate you guys checking it out.

I dont really like Yufeng as a love interest because of how her character is portrayed in the original book. Sure she is pitiful but at the same time she isnt innocent. Also I just feel like her having kids the same age as the MC isnt good. And you are right that u don't have to take everyone from Yun Che's harem, but some of them deserve better endings. Also I would love for u to recommend another fanfic ATG that has the same depth as urs. I can guarantee that there would not be one like that. Anyways I would prefer it if they stayed close friends rather than love interests.

I honestly still think its too early to assume she will be a part of the harem.

I agree with all your comments, but at the same time lets calm down. I'm sure he is not the only author on the site who dropped his novel after getting money from it. I get that it was irresponsible of him, but he is a teenager so you can't do much.

Looking forward to the rest of the novel. I will say that the family is ****ed up.

plz beat teiko

You should have made him leave after beating the three. Like he said there is no point in him staying there and he would be monitored rather than being able to do what he wants.