This will be my proper yet short review.
Writing Quality: 5/5
- My standards have stoop so low in this site that this work is just surprising and amazing. There may be little mistakes and there, but compared to other fanfics here? It is ignorable.
Stability of Updates: 3/5
- As of right now, it is yet to be updated in a week. So I'll settle for a three right now. Though knowing the author and his update schedule on his former work, his updates were certainly stable and fast- so this may change in the future.
Story Development: 5/5
- I'll give 5 for now because the story is not rushed like others where the girls suddenly fall in love in the mc just because. Then the MC also doesn't think with his pp so don't expect for him to just want every girl. Going by the author's other SL work, our mc might stick with a single girl like Huang Yu. Again, because there is only a handful of chapters, this rating may change.
Character Design: 5/5
- Just as I have said in the SD rating, the girls don't suddenly fall in love with the mc because he is 'so powerful, so handsome' like others- which is a huge plus. Again, the MC actually thinks with his brain and not his little brother which actually saves him from the trouble of having some young master chasing him because MC stole the young master's 'woman'.
World Background: 5/5
- 5 right now because the background is already built from the original work. This may change because the author may add other things.
Good Writing Quality with little to no mistakes.
Stable Updates (?May change)
Not Rushed story development.
Characters with an actual personality
and world background (Well, this is fanfic and not an original work)