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Char Govinda. I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com

2017-06-06 JoinedCanada
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  • char
    char1mth
    Commented

    Bro flexed 😂

    Pei Xuanjing pacified his true Qi and waved his hand, saying, "I am Pei Xuanjing. Mr. Shen, there's no need for that. Encountering injustice on the road and extending a helping hand is what we, martial artists, do."
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    The Sims: I Open the Immortal Path for All Beings
    Eastern ¡ Autumn comes after night rain
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  • char
    char8mth
    Replied to omnikinesis

    I know the feeling, I have been an avid reader myself, before I started to write. You can see I had many endeavours, before this AI wave came. My intention was to let it assist me, but I guess the human touch was lost somewhere between the paragraphs, and now that I reread the story, there is so much unnecessary inner monologues. But thank you to your honest review, or else I would have written 100 more chapters and wouldn't realise why people were not noticing my novel lol.

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char8mth
    Replied to omnikinesis

    Thank you for your honest review. I used the AI to rewrite my base chapters, and that is the problem I suppose. I will be rewriting all the chapters and get that human touch.

    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char8mth
    Replied to Sojuuuus

    Because he has “bigger” plans. Read on brother ✌🏼

    Ch 31 Departure
    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char8mth
    Replied to Ventallion

    "Little did I know, I would get caught..."

    Ch 17 Shopping
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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char8mth
    Replied to Ventallion

    It is xD

    Ch 21 Dinner
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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Posted

    Writing a self review here. 45 Chapter in now. Please review the work and provide feedback peeps. Need it to stay motivated. And if you like it, share the story xD. Peace Out.

    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to ChenChenChenChen

    Sure, do update the review. And I will keep on writing!

    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to SupraID

    Thank you for the reply!

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to ChristinaHalden

    Thank you for the reply!

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to Rana_Dughabati

    Thank you for the reply!

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to AndyShriller

    Thank you!

    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to GOVinda2

    Thank you!

    altalt
    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char9mth
    Replied to Apfelkuchen18

    Thank you! I will keep updating. Keep supporting xD

    Ch 19 Homecoming (2)
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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char10mth
    Replied to ILovemyself_84

    Do share your thoughts after reading xD

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
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  • char
    char10mth
    Replied to Laughing_Fox_9871

    Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

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    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
    Urban ¡ char
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  • char
    char1yr
    Replied to Dotencsure

    1

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    The Great Genetic Era
    Eastern ¡ Pig Sanbu
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  • char
    char1yr
    Commented

    took him a long time to think abt this

    Since the Spiritual Map Space was so magical, why don't he plant some vegetables inside? Even if it wasn't for the sake of earning money, it would be good to improve his meals occasionally! The vegetables grown in the Spiritual Map Space would definitely be much better than the vegetables sold in the market!
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    God-tier Farm
    Urban ¡ Gentleness In A Steel Gun
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  • char
    char1yr
    Commented

    here comes our chea...

    Xia Ruofei did not realize that while he was rummaging, a drop of blood dripped from the wound on his arm and landed on an unassuming scroll in the box.
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    God-tier Farm
    Urban ¡ Gentleness In A Steel Gun
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  • char
    char1yr
    Commented

    bhindi

    That was the okra.
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    I Can Enter The Game
    Urban ¡ Ask The Heart Forever
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