Review Detail of omnikinesis in Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

Item: Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
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omnikinesisLv59mthomnikinesis

it's not a real story. By that, I mean it's an Ai generated fiction.it lacks the human touch and I hate Ai generated stories 😑 😒 🙄 😤 😐 ....

Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

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charAuthorchar

Thank you for your honest review. I used the AI to rewrite my base chapters, and that is the problem I suppose. I will be rewriting all the chapters and get that human touch.

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omnikinesisLv5omnikinesis

Well, I didn't mean to be rude, but I really hate those, so good luck with your rewrite.

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charAuthorchar

I know the feeling, I have been an avid reader myself, before I started to write. You can see I had many endeavours, before this AI wave came. My intention was to let it assist me, but I guess the human touch was lost somewhere between the paragraphs, and now that I reread the story, there is so much unnecessary inner monologues. But thank you to your honest review, or else I would have written 100 more chapters and wouldn't realise why people were not noticing my novel lol.

omnikinesis:Well, I didn't mean to be rude, but I really hate those, so good luck with your rewrite.

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