Review Detail of Laughing_Fox_9871 in Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

Item: Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
Rating: 3.8

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

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charAuthorchar

Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

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ILovemyself_84Lv4ILovemyself_84

I‘M excited to start reading!☺️🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬

char:Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

10mth

charAuthorchar

Do share your thoughts after reading xD

ILovemyself_84:I‘M excited to start reading!☺️🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬

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