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I‘m looking forward to new chapters, just don’t make the time in the game to long if you want him to cross over to the new world or maybe a different world? Is this ff focused on playing the game or on after the shutdown and crossover? Whichever it is the focus should be on that. So make the game chapter short. Like 10-15 chapters. Nothing more annoying than endless Yggdrasil gaming chapters. If MC knows about Overlord let him build a nice harem
Pleas write with paragraphs, I can’t read it like this! My eyes hurt
Still not free will
They should go to Naruto, Artemis would be great Shinubi, Chakra is op too
He couldn’t defeat him cause he died of old age in the moment they met. Konushibo still felt the fear of death in that moment and new if Yoroichi attacked he would be dead
It was still said in the manga Kokushi o would have died with one attack of Yoroichi, even when he was so old he died in that moment.
He has his memories and instincts, Spider-Man dodges bullets on instinct (spider-sense) he can’t see them, so that’s not an excuse
Shouldn’t she be way older? Wasn’t Tony in the movies a teenager/ young adult when his parents were murdered. When they died of old age it should have been way later than that right? Or is this comic stuff?
But people now him as Finn already, that’s an established identity, so they already do, but I guess the system means that they shouldn’t know he has powers, in the beginning at least. Than he begins to create an Identity this Shadow guy. Which is what is not supposed to be found out. People already know he has magic so that cannot be meant with identity and they know his real name as an American citizen so he created this identity, which is than not supposed to be found out about! Thats a plot hole from what I understand
But a lot weaker right? Kryptonian under the yellow sun is way stronger…