anubisthegoat

Ok, we agree to disagree

so?

This rating isn’t accurate anymore after I read chapter 3, please read my comment on the chapter for up to date opinion

First of all, quite a few spelling errors, second why a gender change, in my opinion fucking disgusting but you do you. Thanks for the chapter but wtf how can Padme just randomly say: it’s ok to have more women… I mean Star Wars is fantasy yeah but fantasy not FANTASY OUT MY ASS. They didn’t meet for ten seconds, she has memories of dying while in pain of childbirth and losing her Husband to the dark side, and he finds his wife, for whom he killed a bunch of people (children) and they act like it’s nothing and she’s like, you can sleep with other people no problem! The dialogue is worse than in the prequels. Please take some time to reflect and listen to my criticisms. This isn’t good writing, not even decent. But thank you for spending your free time on writing ff

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HUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH??? changed gender?! Am I reading this correctly? If yes 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Five stars for now for the huge potential, please don’t fuck it up. Take time for the chapters to write quality stuff instead of only quantity. And please don’t drop!

Interesting approach, though his memories should have been more of an emotional burden (especially Vader part) or did he also mature, so he actually lived through these moments, and become an adult? (In mind not body)

Shak Ti, Ayla, Bo- Katan or Satine maybe

Oh Hell NO! Please no gender bend I can’t, I always have to think about the male then. There are many females like Shaak Ti or Ayla Secura, Bo-Katan, Duchess Satine Kryze. Or whoever else