RachelBrooke

Thank you for the chapter!

Thank you for the chapter!

Hi! I have read until Chapter 3. Even though it is still early for me to write a review, I just came across that this is the second time Noah trying his luck with this series. So this early review is for supporting him. He changed the title, the cover and even the synopsis. What I noticed, the synopsis did not do the justice for this series. No wonder most authors said synopsis is the most important part in "selling" a book. For the first three chapters, I can guarantee you that this series is different than what you have read. It is the same feeling and instinct whenever you see a new manga that you feel, "This one is going to be a big hit." In terms of writing, it is good for a webnovel. You cant expect the newbie authors here to have a very high quality of writing since it would be costly to hire an editor. In terms of updates, I believe the author already had many chapters written but yet to be upload since had mass released this series before. So you can expect a stability in the updates. For the story development, the concept of elemental power is not something new. Same goes for the aura power. We have seen this quite a lot of time. But, the way how the power is wielded and written is good and can make you excited. The same goes to how the fighting scenes were written. For characters, I only came across a few of them since it is still early. But I like the way Noah wrote about them and introduce them. Only for the head of the families part that felt unnecessary to be introduced if they were just for the sake of a few unnecessary lines. I reserve my comment on the world building since it is still early for me to comment about it. Similar to others, I will come back later for another review.

Here comes the MC.

Your time will come, Noah. Keep on writing!

Like I said, go train!

Wait! Tell me!

Plot twist.

Courageous but not bright enough.

You cannot go against the prophecy my king.