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Alexander_74087dCommentedCh 1 The Golden Hands- Alexander_740814dCommentedCh 20 Notice
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i don t think the grammar is and was that Bad. So i don t mind it. Just a question when in the far future you get to the mines of Maria in Lord of the rings can you also write an side adventure Story about the nameless beings oder than sauron. They are probably stronger than trolls and should be a great opportunity for Points even when he got stronger like end Level oder the original novel ( i mean lord of the rings part). they are not really talked about so you could give them maybe strengh enhancing magic. maybe even let them live as another race of middle earth. and let them be a gratis danger. maybe that they only after the mc visits them learn about the surface World. you can also let them start another war after sauron is dealt with
Ch 21 Chapter 20: Hard hit - Alexander_74081mthCommented
you Römerberg baki fight?
'If I were him, I would eat insects. If we compared the strength relativity to size, then insects would be the strongest creatures on earth.' I thought. - Alexander_74081mthCommented
that's is gonna be a chaotic game with blakebeard Langfinger and causing eathquakes, Light (since he knows their names) killing everyone and Jin woo making them join his team.
"Leon Cromwell, Marshall D. Teach, Yagami Light, Sung Jin Woo…" he let out a long string of names, and as he did, the recipient of those names stepped out of the crowd and stood on one side without needing to be told. - Alexander_74081mthCommentedI took the Scroll and Opened it and found only a Measly 2 names written on it, the Blood on it was so old it was couldn't be deciphered, I sighed and Signed my name with Blood after cutting my finger with a kunai (no one is Monstrous enough to Bite their finger, Like wtf).
- Alexander_74081mthCommentedAnyways, I was kindly escorted to the buses by the young lady, Anri Teieri. I would think that she worked as a model somewhere, but she is apparently an employee of the JFA. Wasn't it a waste of time for such a beautiful woman to work at JFA? I'm sure she isn't even receiving a percentage of what she could earn as a model, at least in Europe, because I've heard a lot about Japanese idols.
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So he is bitter in bed too
After that, my life was more or less what you would call normal but exciting in the tribe. When I was 16 I was married to the daughter of the chief, since I was the most outstanding warrior and hunter of the tribe. My strength and healing factor as well as my intelligence, were what differentiated me from my peers. I was just better than the others ... in everything. - Alexander_74082mthCommented
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make a schedule of regulary releasing chapters like 1 every 2 or 3 days. if you have one take more time. per chapter. maybe start another one for something fresh and New fanfic like idk haikyuu or eyeshield if you wanna stay in Sport and if you wann domething different maybe jjk naruto one piece or even some fanfics of classicals like Harry Potter or Lord of the rings. you could also read other fanfics regarding them as Inspiration
After this story, what should I do as a writer? - Alexander_74082mthCommented
yes
What do you guys think of the story? Is it worth continuing? - Alexander_74083mthReplied to FinnsRevenge
as small as possible so that it is harder to see and hit them
Luckily he wasn't using a PVP character nor did he like making abominations as funny and ridiculous as they look. The server was vanilla in almost everything stats being in that, and there were multiple quality-of-life mods on the server, one that gave more options to customize the survivor… To make them less ugly. - Alexander_74084mthCommented
chess
I was playing chess against the AI on my smartphone. I might go to DxD someday, so having a bit of chess knowledge would be helpful. - Alexander_74084mthReplied to FAN_OF_READING
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And well... that was all my progress and planning for this first year. I may not have done much, and time may be tight, but I still think my training is progressing at a very satisfactory rate. I could give up half of what I'm doing, but I know that all of this will help me in the future, and what matters is that I will have a solid foundation for my growth, because as the amazing and wise Bruce Lee said, " I'm not afraid of the man who has practiced ten thousand different kicks, but the man who has practiced the same kick ten thousand times." - Alexander_74084mthCommented
Not a good combination of sentences
Too bad for him I am straighter than an arrow. - Alexander_74084mthCommentedYet Jar Jar Binks exists.
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"Ah, I love it when a plan come together." I mused. - Alexander_74084mthCommented
i like how many of you and me instantly thaught the naughty and only thought of padawan.
For I got a small feeling through the Force Arisha and mine's future were somehow destined to connect. - Alexander_74084mthCommented[Insert Image of Sheev Palpatine/Darth Sidious Here]
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the cryatal for Orange is the kybercrystal of fools. IT is knownas the weakest Crystal. So NOT Orange
3. Orange