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In the comics yes, but my version here has things differently while taking lots of ideas from the movies and comics. I want it to be my own little world and just take inspiration from the stories you all know and love. Hope this clears some things up and thanks for the support, I hope I do justice for the characters you love.
The idea at least for me, is that it acts as like a danger detector and if there's killer intent it goes off. I got the killer intent faint thing from Hajime No ippo, so I probably could've portrayed it better. Thank you for pointing this out, I'll write it better in my later chapters.
I've read some comments and the theme of making it a haram story has come up a decent amount of time and wanted more opinions on this. I'm fine with whatever but the haram aspect will probably happen a lot later, I want the romance to feel real. Just reply with your opinion on this comment and whatever the majority wants. Sorry for the long wait, Peace.
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Nice catch, it should be fixed now thanks for the help.
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