Review Detail of Flaming_star in SPIDER-MAN

Item: SPIDER-MAN
Rating: 4

Review detail

Flaming_starLv15mthFlaming_star

maybe you should give a little more efforts in the character and world development.

SPIDER-MAN

MassiveSimp

Liked it!

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MassiveSimpAuthorMassiveSimp

World Building and Character development will occur later on and gradually, it's only been 4 chapters so I'm still introducing everyone to Peter. I don't just want to make it instant, I want him to develop gradually and naturally.

5mth

Hades2205Lv2Hades2205

Harem

MassiveSimp:World Building and Character development will occur later on and gradually, it's only been 4 chapters so I'm still introducing everyone to Peter. I don't just want to make it instant, I want him to develop gradually and naturally.

5mth