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So I loved your other story so I’m sure I’m going to love this one too!

Enjoyed the beginning

Making the genjutsu fight exciting whilst being against a “bug” was what made it phenomenal. lol. I see ur a writer too. I read a bit of your stuff. This story is much better than your stuff.

Completely disagree. He literally has the talent of a GOD dude. Like…? Are people supposed to just think or act like what he does is normal? It’s not man. It’s godly lol. And reading through the other comments it looks like most everyone agrees with me. We got an intro into Inoichi’s thoughts, their family dynamic, and we got to see his music talent in action. Overall I think it was a pretty solid chapter. People are going to be shocked and surprised at his gifts and talents. And he has limitless potential so he’s going to exceed everyone’s expectations. Regardless everyone has their opinions. I just disagree with yours.

What type of story are you looking for? The author just gave us a phenomenal fight scene last chapter, we now get to see though Inoichi’s perspective, and get to see a glimpse into their family dynamic and Satoshi’s musical talent. The author is building the story. Every chapter can’t be action, and fight scenes. But I suppose a lot of people reading on WebNovel are used to fast pasted stories that lack depth and character development. Author keep up the great work, and don’t let comments like these affect the depth of your story.

Yup

True

Unfortunately I agree. Had high hopes but another bad story

Yeah… what can I say other than it’s another unfortunate story. Dropped. Too boring and monotonous. Scene breaks were confusing as all get out. I see what you were trying to do, but it was poorly executed. Overall nothing note worthy and pretty bad.

Terrible way to do a scene break. Yikes