Alex_Fabianoki
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Interesting story concept. The writing of this novel is not too bad, compared to most other beginners. As for the characters, they are not yet clearly visible, but the general idea can be seen. The story elements are good, overall it is a story worth reading if the author continues to write this novel.
Good writing quality, very good to read, and has a unique writing style. The updates have been quite stable so far. The story development is good and interesting to read further. The character design is very captivating and makes you want to read further. The background of the world is very unique, initially strange, but as the story progresses, it becomes clearer and more interesting to read further.