Everything that the MC sowed is going to be harvested by Doflamingo, Ross will only be his brother's lapdog despite being stronger than Doffy and with this I lost interest in this fic.

The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally

I don't know what is the reason why the protagonist wants to make Doffy king of the world, it's pathetic, it's better that he dies and that the MC escapes by jumping into the sea because I think it's stupid that he didn't do it yet

The MC will end up being like a Shinobi from Naruto, manipulating all the elements, which lacks a sharingan😂 The world of One Piece is so big and yet you need the abilities that your protagonist has to be outside of the world itself 🤦‍♂️

2 more interrogation chapters? That follows 10 more chapters as they jump from tree to tree and another 10 as they enter the orochimaru base and who knows how many more fights, what a waste of time. The apocalypse will come before the author arrives in Shippuden

Tsunade is the next candidate for hokage, she has to go a medical ninja qualified enough to help and the only one is the MC, and she is also strong enough to defend herself if not all these chapters are useless

A naïve, boring, silly and weak protagonist, if he hadn't had that 10-year training with the Dark King, the story that the author wants to interpret would be more believable, but unfortunately it's not like that [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

This is simply absurd, in a large part of the Grandline there are no threats to the MC with his supposed strength and look at him here stopped in arabasta being deceived 3 times by someone very inferior in terms of strength and all for putting Robin in a harem that with the attitude and personality of the protagonist of this story it is impossible for him to have that type of relationship, Chopper has a better chance of having a harem than the Mc, boring story and boring protagonist

I have a doubt for the author, what material is this door made of for the MC to cut it and thus avoid falling into an obvious trap, because I don't think that door is the same stuff that poneglyphs are made of

Bonney is 12 years old Sick animal

ZZZZZZZZZz Author deletes negative reviews, LOSER [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

The MC is a child and he forgot the death of his parents in one chapter The civil war starts because of the collateral damage caused by the battles that the members of the avengers had, all the innocent people who died because of the conflicts, Zemo only needed to fan the flame and he didn't need anything else

It's not to hurt them physically, the MC doesn't show any reaction to anything that happens to him. Remember how the conflict of the civil war movie began, Zemo didn't have the need to do physical harm to make the Avengers fight each other

This fic has a protagonist who doesn't do anything 1. The Avengers were involved in the death of their parents and the MC shows no sign of anger, sadness or hatred 2. Tony Stark mocked his parents' death and did nothing, showed no sign of displeasure. 3. Fury treats the MC in such a carefree way, the MC if he wants can destroy an entire city and his avengers caused him great emotional damage he even tries to invite him to the same group 😐 4. Because of how the story progresses, the love interest is Wanda, the same one who manipulated the Hulk's mind and we already know what happened 5. The author shows no reaction on the part of the avengers to what they caused, Rogers is too moralistic to put aside what happened, they literally created an enemy that is a weapon of mass destruction and show no remorse [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Ash en esta etapa de la historia que es comenzando su aventura actúa de manera más inteligente que el Mc, con eso lo digo todo[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Not even Ash, who is dumber than a rock at this stage of his life, would act the same way, and the MC has the gall to lecture him in previous chapters

Tanto virgen hay hoy en día por Dios consigan una novia de verdad sus manos no cuentan

Típica novela escrita por un virgen inseguro que se cree un hombre alfa solo por que se acicala con personajes ficticios [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

The MC is Ash's servant, the author thinks it's a good idea to make an MC with a big enough dream to be one of the best coaches in the world and makes him travel and live with one of the characters that would make her a direct competitor simply ridiculous, or maybe he wants a yaoi romance of the protagonist with Ash because of the harem[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Entire chapter of information that we already know about the fallen angels and fighting less than 1 chapter how boring is this. ZZZZZZZZZ