Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

dude, honestly speaking, the idea is good, you just had problems transmitting good dialogues, take the ready-made story that the books/series have and change it little by little so that you don't get lost and especially paying attention to the dialogues, this is important in all work especially in game of thrones, and there are also several problems in the cohesion of the story I hope you can rewrite the story and with a quality much higher than the previous one, don't get it wrong, I didn't want to offend or put you down, I hope I helped you have more desire to rewrite. keep trying!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!! And KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!! Give me moreeeeee

No problem

Thanks for the great chapter!!!! Keep up the great job!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Don't worry man, focus on recovering and maintaining quality And if you can, please don't make the gaps between chapters too long. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!+

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man, I'm glad you're back, I was starting to fear the worst Thanks for the chapter!!! please keep up the great work, don't give up

Tranquilo cara É só que devido a você tava com uma frequência tão grande que quando parou do nada eu temi pelo pior Mas descanse e pesquise pelo tempo que for necessário prefiro esperar mais um pouco por um material de boa qualidade do que ter a chance de você dropar

REALLY? serious? interesting!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!