Aei, ever observant, couldn't ignore the growing tension in the air. His senses keenly attuned to the environment, he could feel the tremors beneath his feet, each one reverberating through his bones. The approaching threat, though unseen, was palpable, a dark cloud hanging over their already dire situation.
Thank you for pointing this out. I just went through the first chapter and I think i will go with your advice thus I'll be uploading a prologue soon. Once again thanks.
This is my first time reading a novel about zombies and so far i'm loving it.
My only problem is the tense in which the story is written in, which i'm not quite used to. But it's definitely worth reading.
Something happening to earth and magic to it is one of my fave novels to read as i am also writing something similar. Great work Author. Look forward to read more of your works.
Thank you very much for your review. Thank you for pointing out the paragraph issue as well. I will do well to check that in the coming chapters. Arigato-Thanks.