Review Detail of The_Open_Sky in ARCANE REVERSAL

Heyo, reading Arcane Reversal, I have to admit that the author is good at characterization and dialogue. The characters don't talk like robots and I feel that immerses you into the world the author built. However, I think Arcane Reversal is a case of a diamond in the rough and that's a good thing, as the author can refine it further.First, although the author's descriptions are good, I think improvements can be made in punctuation, quotes and dividing paragraphs. It would be much more neat if the author could space the full stops and commas correctly. The paragraphs should also be divided into at most five sentences in each, too long and it becomes a text wall.Try best to format sentence quotes into single sentences as well Author, it helps the reader process it more easily plus it lets you insert some descriptions and actions in between lines. Even with all this, Arcane Reversal has good potential and I do recommend you read and support the author!