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ElectricWrites

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Just someone with a wild imagination and who loves writing. Future Video Game Programmer.

2023-07-06 JoinedPuerto Rico
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    Replied to Asurathoth

    Things aren't what you think they have been said to be. Keep that in mind.

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    Replied to Asurathoth

    Well, I do have a plan for that part. Though, it won't be revealed until way~ later. You should start noticing some "odd" things when you continue reading. If you would tolerate my inexperienced with writing by the first season. Which I hope you do.

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    Replied to Asurathoth

    This was one of the mistake I made when reading back when I was just "Doing this for fun". I should've made the Marvel characters that are very intuitive noticed that Karito just seemed very "out of place". But I just did that later instead, which I just said to myself "Mistakes where made, but oh well..."

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    Replied to Asurathoth

    This ability does sound cool. I just wished I knew more before starting this whole thing.

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    Replied to Asurathoth

    It took me a bit to read everything you wrote, and I do appreciate you not being cruel to me, which is usually the case. I will confess that I started this story randomly because I was bored. I was very insecure about my writing, so I did use AI to fix most of the grammar errors I did, it's isn't after Volume 2 or Season two that I've gained a bit more experience and decided to actually commit to this story, one that I just started as a way to have fun. And most of the things you've said make sense, I was inexperienced, and I still somewhat am. But I wish for more advice on how to be better to deliver ya'll a fun story that doesn't have as much stuff that doesn't make sense, like a few of the parts in season 1. But I'm still trying my best and I'll take your advice and try my best.

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    Replied to Cosmic_Nova

    I'll take my time to build it.

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    Replied to Cosmic_Nova

    Then, I think you'll like the progressive change that I'm doing to the MC in Volume 2.

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    Replied to ElectricWrites

    I'll do research*. Pardon my typo.💀

    Wall-Crawling: Can cling to any surface using just his fingertips and feet.
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    Replied to Riger82_

    I appreciate the clarification. I will put that on my notes. If that's the case and do a bit more research on Miles Morales' new capabilities in most recent chapters of his comic.

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    Replied to Riger82_

    And for why the look low, it's because Stats and Skills are separate. It's basically this, his Base Stats, his Super Stats and his Skill stats. Which Continues to stack up the more he trains and more experience he gains. So it's just building up the character until he is ready to face Planetary to Universal to even higher level threats.

    Hero: Spider-Man (Miles Morales)
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    The MC has no fighting experience unlike Captain America. Yes, it is true that the MC is superior in terms of Abilities but in terms of Battle IQ, skill and experience the protagonist is severely lacking. Which is what Captain takes advantage of, because the MC is still learning.

    Survive 2 rounds with Captain America
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    First, this is the first time he's ever done this. Second, he isn't an experienced hero at all, he might as well be a kid in a fantasy world. Third, the system is built to assist him on his Base Stats and his Super Base Stats, for the sake of multiplying his stats, like training from the basics instead of the advance, if you've read The God Of Highschool you would understand where I'm coming from. Long story short, his skills get turned of for the sake of his training so his stats get multiplied when his Skills get activated.

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    Replied to YaBoiTJ

    That means a lot, truly. By the time I was literally starting to write and rewrote that part so many times in an attempt to not make it cringe. So you saying this means a lot. I still consider myself a newbie in writing, so this encourages me! 😊

    I won't fail. I promised! I CAN'T FAIL! AFTER ALL THIS TIME I CAN'T FAIL! COME ON BODY OF MINE! COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON, COME ON! I WON'T FAIL! NEVER AGAIN!
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    Replied to Itzpheng

    By the time the stock prices lower, money shouldn't be an issue for him in the future.

    "You have 2 more days before the main storyline starts Player"
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    He won't have to worry about money by becoming an Avenger. Tony does pay the heroes.

    "You have 2 more days before the main storyline starts Player"
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    Replied to Itzpheng

    There is a stamina bar, it's just separate.

    Well... that makes sense, I didn't know the system was like that. It is depending on what character I use. For instance, if I was in Black Clover I would have a Mana bar, if I was in Dragon Ball I would then have a Ki bar...right?
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    Replied to Itzpheng

    It's just the powers. In Wattpad, I had original art for how he looks like and other original arts for chapter's up ahead.

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    Replied to KevZenB

    With the amount of researching I did for just the first season, I really do hope so, even if I was just starting to write for the first time.😭

    (Presence) "It will change depending on what's in the multiverse that you are in. For example, when you get into the Dragon Ball Z universe the system will change the leveling system and skill depending on what you chose to be and the abilities that exist in that world. Of course, at different levels, you will be allowed to have an ability that doesn't belong in that universe. What will happen if you by any chance are forcefully teleported to a different world or universe is that you will remain with the abilities of your current build and the system will adapt itself to the world's source of power. Like if you by any chance become a viltrumite in the DBZ universe you will be able to learn Ki-related abilities due to the system adapting to the new environment."
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    Replied to Cuslto

    Understandable. But the story has to continue! ;-;

    (Sasha) "Hey, cutie. It's been a while, hasn't it? I've been busy sorry~. Did you miss me?" Giggles
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    Replied to Cuslto

    *Vegeta theme kicks in*

    I will become that hope. I will restore this world back to normal.
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