Mc is only the king's servant, he doesn't have an ambition and the excuse is that he seeks peace for his family but still it doesn't change the story at all so far, the MC proposes the worst marriage candidates for his sister that would not stop the dance of the dragons

I don't know who is the protagonist of this story, is it Doflamingo or Rosinante? Rosinante is the one who does all the work and Doflamingo just waits and will be the king of the world I hope the author fixes that and doesn't delete my review

I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock

What a relief that this fic doesn't have romance or harem because it would be disgustingly long if it did

I have some recommendations: 1. Don't write the events as they are that we already know from the anime/manga, many people don't like that in a fanfic they describe as it is the scenes that all One Piece fans know 2. If you make your protagonist a luffy you make a mistake for both the plot and your Mc plus the world government would not hesitate to send all the admirals, Cp, holy knights just to eliminate a pirate crew that has Robin, the son of a dragon and someone with Roger's blood

In the last few chapters, the supposed 10-year training with the Dark King himself went to waste [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

So far the MC's only talent is making a fool of himself

In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Author you can't make Riser more boring I dare you

Bored protagonist who doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, very bad this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Hopefully the MC dies like this ends this fanfic that protagonist so silly, a recommendation before killing him that his pokemon have the same fate and also Leaf can do NTR to him since you want to make him mature that way

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I hope that from today no one will be surprised that Riser transforms the Trihexa into a woman for his harem. God complex plot xD

A recommendation to the author: don't make promises that you won't keep, just don't let us know anything and that's it, you don't suffer any kind of stress and you don't waste the readers' time

Este fic es como si eligieras lo peor de otros fics de pokémon y lo mesclaras para luego tener una sopa qué si tuvieras todo el hambre de mundo no te comerías, no entiendo la calificación tan alta, que se puede esperar de webnovel igualmente

I only read 10 chapters and I can't handle the cringe that gives this version of Naruto, it's horrifying, he is supposed to have memories of a Naruto hokage and he became an old man but he acts much worse than his time in the academy [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

In my eyes I look like a coward despite his strength, in our eyes I look like a pathetic coward, and at the moment the pathetic Riser transforms into Aizen the author realized that his character is weak-minded and pathetic

More than two weeks ago I stopped reading this and it didn't advance anything, the only thing it did was make me want to sleep too much every time I read a chapter, what a bad fanfic Riser is supposed to act like a villain, but he acts like a shoddy brat, and to think that we would save more than 150 chapters if he married Rias and more knowing that in the end Gremory will end up being Riser's wife Just pathetic

I will come to read in a week to know if something advanced this story because what follows are only internal mologos of Chinese fried chicken