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Who is the protagonist of this? The cover is Doflamingo just like you're going to benefit from it all I think that the author shows us this story in parts, first the secondary character who is Rosinante and then comes the part where Doflamingo shines and shows that he was the protagonist

Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Hahahahaha protagonist so weak and pathetic. He allows himself to be intimidated, manipulated and attacked and for him everything is fine, and I dare say that after 2 years the MC has the same weakness of the clock which is the short transformation time

Your comment would be valid if the protagonist had not been sold into slavery by his own father and then trained for 10 years by one of the strongest characters in One Piece, literally the MC lacks common sense

There's not much to say about this fic, it's very bad, a very slow story and so out of logic, a boring, empty and clunky protagonist that the only thing I manage to awaken in me is an incredible boredom I don't understand how anyone can like a protagonist who doesn't show any emotion and all he does is nod and act like a fool

That fruit is not a lodge, it would be a special paramecia like that of katakuri

The Mc is a simple useless, he doesn't show emotions and yet the author thinks of giving him a harem please I think Chopper would have more chances to achieve that than the Mc, even the haki the Mc doesn't show will for anything I don't know how the haki of the conqueror woke up and to end up as fuck the Mc can't cut a door with how strong he supposedly is or the dark king is an idiot incompetent, or the author makes the MC useless [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Novela cliché típica de Webnovel y autor típico que borra reseñas negativas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

If you put Bonney in the harem you're a sick filthy

Total disappointment an immature MC who[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] just wants to play family

Come on author make him suffer more, kill leaf and his pokemon in front of the MC because the truth deserves it, what follows after this the MC is going to cause a pack of tyranitar, let the MC suffer more so he goes crazy like the joker or something similar maybe so matures

Good job, I like right now the 2 female love interests who are probably the strongest currently in the canon I don't think you need any more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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If you love Ash so much, do you want her to marry your MC, I don't understand the harem etiquette as a previous comment, is MC part of Ash's harem? And what was the point of the initial pokemon poll if you put a completely different one, making it look like the opinion you asked for from your readers, you didn't care about it at all, it's a very disappointing fic and had potential[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Junk author only deletes negative reviews, deletes the positive ones you put with your other accounts disgusting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Junk author only deletes negative reviews, deletes the positive ones you put with your other accounts disgusting [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Well it starts again as what happened before it will be 2 weeks of internal monologues and information that we know until the arc of the peace treaty begins. 😪😪😪😴😴😴

Of all the enemies that Riser currently has not murderer any which protagonist so pathetic only internal mologos and talk trash as Chinese so pathetic is that the only one who died of his enemies did not die by the hands of Riser 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

We already know that the dragon is not going to die they will save him again and as always Riser will be a dog that barks but does not bite