I dropped the novel because I lost interest in it and also because I didn't know what I was doing the story is not so great so thanks to those who have read this series. if you want to read more of my works then Read Grave Borne Revenant. That story is way better, there are still some mistakes and some small retcons but I found a way to make them work at this time 4/12/24 Volume one is almost over also because i didn't upload for an entire month the chapters are free so I suggest that you catch up to it now

Id like to say sorry for your the bad grammar

Look what i drew☺️

and just like that we are close to the end of volume one, sadly I had to rush it because I'm kinda messing up the world a bit too much I wanted to do more but if I stayed writing volume one then I would have dropped this series I already take to much breaks on this series. id say volume one will have about a hundred chapters

great first few chapter's its kinda to like I mean the sentence kindad like space out a bit you just fix that the story has potienal to be good not one of the greats but good https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOtwfyMa5mM&list=RDjvU4xWsN7-A&index=27

i think this was a review sawp many other authors do this on this platform

Thanks 🙏 i keep spelling that word wrong any way what do you think of the story so far?

Yep i should probably go and fix that💀

the story is pretty good so far there were a few challenges (Because I'm half asleep rn lol) it has pontinoel to grow into a goos story so keep up the work

This isekai has potential....the beginning comes off pretty well it pushes you into the characters and the small world for awhile and it adds context to the novel the character likes. This novel has potential

i like your writing style its god to read through I didn't stop on anyone thing so good for that also the main character is honestly sad as hell and all I can say is real

Good job super star i hope your work improves

Thank you for the review

the Begging was honestly quite good but at the same time i kinda wish that you gave the husband and wife a name earlier on its still good though also the level of detail is quite good

romance stories arent really my thing but al I wanna say is WHat the HElll man like what the hell I didn't respect to find something like that commmmm onnnnn in crying

Thats alot of Dialouge

Dam Thats Crazy

series has the potential to be good. All you have to do is -make the MC have a steady power growth -add something unique other than magic that sets your world apart from other novels -add some Complex or better ideas to the magic system because, from what I've read so far, the series kind of feels like I've already read it before. Don't put any dam hearm or else I will come for you that's kinda all I got for ya buddy. You have potential but don't be lazy and add shitty concepts that's already been done a thousand times I actually want you to grow as a writer, so please think over your chapter before you continue to write. also add more unique concepts and systems to the world[img=recommend]

if this turns into a hearm im outta here

Nahhhhhhh thats crazy