Review Detail of Alan_Grimlord in Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows

series has the potential to be good. All you have to do is -make the MC have a steady power growth -add something unique other than magic that sets your world apart from other novels -add some Complex or better ideas to the magic system because, from what I've read so far, the series kind of feels like I've already read it before. Don't put any dam hearm or else I will come for you that's kinda all I got for ya buddy. You have potential but don't be lazy and add shitty concepts that's already been done a thousand times I actually want you to grow as a writer, so please think over your chapter before you continue to write. also add more unique concepts and systems to the world[img=recommend]