I got tired of others trash so I began writing my own trash.
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Ty! I will try to upload more and also try to keep the story interesting!
Hmmm. I wonder? 🤔
Right now I’m thinking about three girls. Anna being the main girl. One won’t appear until later, although I plan to introduce her through the Memory Vault. I will also take the time in the future to build MC’s relationship with his friends, family and other people.
I wouldn’t recommend this book for a few reasons. 150 chapters in and nothing interesting happens. Arc 1 feels like a filler that didn’t need to be that long. Arc 2 feels pointless since the MC’s relationship w/ the elf princess takes one step forward ten steps back. (Maybe more happens idk, I dropped after they spend the night together.) The characters SUCK. There hasn’t been a single likable character yet. MC feels childish and naive even though he’s over 18 and spent time in prison. The sister adds nothing to the story. The side characters are literally just there to annoy the readers. MC seems like he’s suppose to be strong but 150 chapters in the author hasn’t allowed the MC to take a meaningful W. I get slowburns but PLEASE let the audience have something to cheer for. Overall, just a lot of minor details that ruins the book for me.
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I will release a character sheet soon. It will contain characters from arc 1 only. I will add a description of each character. I am pretty forgetful so I might accidentally skip the character’s description during the actual story. If it helps, Atlas has dark blue hair, blue eyes and is 5 ft 11 by his adult age. His final height will be 6 ft 1