M4dScientist

Look up the scientific/medical references.

Specifically after FBI funded “honey traps” & “reverse honey traps”. Sex/love entrapment with 10 Black Guys. Yes, specific.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I read this within 24 hrs, & really enjoyed it. However, it didn’ complete a full plot arc, so I hope the story continues to be published!

Me too. I burst out talking outlook at that point. “23, and acts mature for her age?”, or “Mature because she has 3 kids and has been solo parenting since age 15 while renting her families garage - i. e. the hard way to grow up while discovering family values??”

Ugh! Grab an Editor, ASAP! (Consider one of your first published sentence fragments, incomplete and crossing into another paragraph for possible starting points.) As for the story itself, Lin doesn’t recall when/how he transmigrated?! Was he two or younger? And is he currently 12 (one reference) or 18? Is he looking forward to being tested, based on one section, or recovering & implementing a fallback plan after failing, based on another? I’m confused, at least about this story. 1/5 Stars in present state, based on Chapter One.

And we likely start developing it while in the womb …

Why die tired & panic’d?

He can't even apply for Journeyman yet. Needs 3+ more solo designed mechs, plus gains on his style/dev model.

Keyword: should have been