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DaoistjgONB5

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2023-03-10 JoinedBrazil
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
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    I found the story quite interesting at first. I liked the character and his characteristics. I hope that when I read the next chapters, I can better understand the relationships made by the character.

    The Mockery of Fate
    Fantasy · Narashie
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Commented

    I just didn't quite understand what this competition is about.

    Ch 2 Competition
    The Mockery of Fate
    Fantasy · Narashie
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Commented

    I really liked the beginning of the story and the change in the outside environment also caught my attention. When she leaves the ball and sees a mysterious group, an impactful scene transformation occurs.

    Ch 1 We meet again
    The Mockery of Fate
    Fantasy · Narashie
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Anya_Voss

    looks like the romance starts now

    As the policeman reached out to grab her, Cheryl acted on instinct. She slammed her fist hard into his temple, stunning him. Before he could react, she had already taken down another officer, this time with the help of the ice cream man, who had swung his heavy scoop with surprising accuracy. For a moment, they stared at each other in shock, but then the ice cream man grinned. "Great shot!" he exclaimed. Cheryl couldn't help but laugh. "Yours wasn't bad either," she said.
    The Mockery of Fate
    Fantasy · Narashie
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Narashie

    thanks for your review.

    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Posted

    I liked the introduction of the story and the character Ace. The characteristics of space and the development of the plot are interesting.

    [BL] My Master , Your Wolf
    Fantasy · redlady
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Commented

    I liked this chapter. The main character, ace, when making dialogues with the gods, right after being reborn in another world, seems to be the beginning of the leverage of the character's power.

    Ch 1 I reincarnate.....and now what?!
    [BL] My Master , Your Wolf
    Fantasy · redlady
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to redlady

    thanks! and truth. The cover doesn't reflect the characteristic of ML now. But at the climax of the story, it will reflect a lot.

    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Posted

    Sorry buddy, I thought I had reviewed your story before. I remembered that I reviewed other works, but I had forgotten about yours. I'm reading the first few chapters. Thank you for understanding

    The Romantic Cultivator
    Eastern · Avidfan
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Posted

    the story of LiNa's rebirth is very interesting. At first, it seems that she has become poor because of her parents' abandonment. Her relationship with her family was not worthy of well-being. I hope that in the next few chapters, she becomes a stronger person.

    REBIRTH AND REVENGE
    Fantasy · g_d
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Elementary519

    I understood what you meant.

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    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Avidfan

    thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked chapter 10!

    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Commented

    I liked the introduction of LiNa's story. I will read the next chapters.

    Ch 1 Rebirth
    REBIRTH AND REVENGE
    Fantasy · g_d
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Commented

    I liked the introduction of the main character in the story. The name was also very creative.

    Alone in her small apartment, Li Na was surrounded by empty takeout boxes and bills she couldn't afford to pay, she couldn't help but feel overwhelmed with sadness and regret. She had always wanted to make her parents proud, to live up to their expectations, but it seemed like nothing she did was ever good enough for them.
    REBIRTH AND REVENGE
    Fantasy · g_d
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to g_d

    thanks for the tip!

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    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to g_d

    thanks buddy!

    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Elementary519

    Jeez, I didn't even notice it in my typings. thanks again for noticing that.

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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Elementary519

    thanks for your tip my friend!

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    A life outside the city
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Elementary519

    Thanks. I am happy to be able to share my story with you.

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    A life outside the city
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  • DaoistjgONB5
    DaoistjgONB51yr
    Replied to Elementary519

    thank you.

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    A life outside the city
    Realistic · DaoistjgONB5
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