FreyjaR

All good and everything, but the pace in BSCS had some problems. Please don't mess up here! The story is very promising!

The start is great. The writing is great too. Fingers crossed.

My advice Is to read it, It's an original novel. I think Erik is a hero and an antihero at the same time. Reading it's kinda magical at some points with the descriptions of the ethereal scenarios. Good

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Nice.