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ViYongRay

ViYongRay

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If you want to write, make sure you yourself enjoyed what you write. If people like what you write, good for them. But you have to be your own first fan. Telling stories through my own way

2022-11-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to SoManyAngels

    The fog shall slowly dispersed, and the narration be revealed. Are you able to wait to see that day? I do wonder. However, I myself are uncertain since nothing is for certain. An outside force is preventing the story from being told. Or maybe, it's just the disconnection through time. - ???

    Ch 6 The Painful Past
    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to SoManyAngels

    At this point I'm convinced my keyboard auto correct is massing with me

    He looked down at his hands, narrowing his eyes in concatenation. 
    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to SoManyAngels

    nah it helped. I didn't noticed some of these mistakes when editing. Or my keyboard is massing with me again ;-;

    = "Everyone! We have to fight back! Like those villains know that we ain't to be messed with!" The chief of the town called out, rallying everyone's fighting spirit.
    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to VertiKalEl

    but thanks for reviewing. i will try improve grammar ;-;

    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to VertiKalEl
    A Noble Goal
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Posted

    I would give 5 stars if the updating stability is good. but there's only one Freaking chap now so eh. anyways. I like the slow build up, I enjoy the world building. is quite good. keep up author! I can't wait for more chapters

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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to CetusWritings

    the confusion is part of the fun . kekeke

    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Posted

    it's quite a straight forward novel, it feels like someone just explaining it.. the idea is quite interesting but so far can't really feel anything. Author, you shouldn't rush things too fast, slowly take your time to build the world. Only than will the impact be bigger. Also pls use commas once in a while...

    I Have The Power Of Artifacts!
    Fantasy · CetusWritings
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to Blanket

    corrected. thanks

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    A Noble Goal
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  • ViYongRay
    ViYongRay1yr
    Replied to Blanket

    Alrighty, next time when I write something similar, I will do that. Thanks for the comment

    Ch 2 Chosen Ones
    A Noble Goal
    Fantasy · ViYongRay
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