the story is interesting, I do recommend it. I read it once a long time ago... it was mtl though, but it was satisfying... in its own way. Now I forgot the website and I'm also too impatient wait for daily free passes. I'm also unable to do what other readers do... that's is, pay-to-_read since I'm not like those rich readers. hey author, we are still waiting for updates on novelfire, count this review as the support from the 'lower class' if you'd call it... anyways.

so... what! is this dropped or something? i saw that you labelled it complete yet I don't think it is... or is it?

First of all, the story's great. that is, if you don't care about reason for something. I on the other hand find it weird that someone would tell another person that they are reincarnated right from the first chapter. I mean its clear the author's desperate to make the girl and rimuru to be acquainted mostly because he is the original protagonist of the anime. I find it quite disappointing because I expected a little mystery of her origin and not straight up stripping all secrets. Even if I know that the story might be interesting I still find that annoying. Letting rimuru to name her is like giving herself in his care. A sort of submission, which I don't like. I may be interested to read it someday but that scene ruined my reading appetite. No offense, just stating my views about it. Ciao... [img=recommend][img=recommend]

I just can't stand the grammar, so I failed to give a good review. The story has no respect to include prepositions, and occasionally misses pronouns. I'm not sure, but that's enough to let me leave from chapter one. someone tell me when the grammar is fixed entirely. Don't trust my other evaluations except the writing quality... from a person on chapter 1

you know, it'd be best if you separate direct speeches from the other words. for instance; He grabbed the shoes below the table and looked out of the window where he saw iron man escape "You won't get away with this." His eyes blazed with fury as he got out of the room towards the conference hall. *something like that*

does it have an MC?

is it a noromance novel? is it a Yuri? is it a typical action, adventure, love novel between male and female character?

still waiting for this novel in novel fire net

Virgins in brothels huh? must be the desperate ones.

I'm starting to like it? I guess... Not bad.

What a coincidence, I also like to write me a novel hehehe

any novel from the author that has Yuri but no male love interest? just pure Yuri? cuz now when I see EPIC OF CATERPILLAR and now REBORN AS A GHOST, I'm now not willing to check out the others in fear of disappointment.

Yo dude, is the Yuri tag real? Coz I don't wanna start reading the novel and discover that its a reverse harem or that some male characters are mixed within

Is the Yuri tag real? Coz I don't wanna start reading and discover its a reverse harem or that there are male characters in the mix...

Reverse harem? But... Doesn't the novel have a Yuri tag?

Why do all of you lock chapters? im a fan of novels and I am looking for free novels to read, where can I find them? (besides the Readnovelfull.com) website? I'm totally broke. yet I want novels!!! please help me asap...

is it Yuri or not?

so... before start reading (coz I don't like disappointments) is this story a Yuri coz I love that. that is why I'm asking as not to waste time if it isn't. no offense.