Everything goes great for the MC at all times. Oh look a set back! Nah, it just turns out 10 times better than expected! Everyone loves the MC the moment they meet him. My suggestion: Add in some adversity or something... Make the side characters more than just background applause for anything the hero does. And please hire an editor!

Amazingly done! World building, character developement and plot. This one has it all! Cant be compared to a lot of the other kingdom building novels on here as its simply in a league of its own.

MC is supposed to be smart. Any time he should be smart though, he simply gets insanely lucky and things somehow work out for him. add in the shallowest of all side characters and antagonists, some thinly veiled racism and you get something I really cant recommend... rating would be lower if not for the great translation! good job translator!

classic nonsense wish fulfillment you have to read without using your brain. once again an author presented with the opportunity to let the hero go through adversary and growth, but instead chooses plot armor and mediocrity. example: MC charges 700+ players in pvp and not one of them uses any of the abilities explained so far, any CC abilities at all or in fact manages to land a direct hit on him. he just leisurely kills everyone he wants to. imagine frodo just straight up jumping over the black gate, walking through mordor in plain view, stroll past sauron and his armies and dunking the ring into the fire.