Thank you for the honest review. It is as you said, and when I noticed it, I made sure to work on correcting it.
I feel the need to add this as well. I am indeed a foreigner, but I am not just learning English, we have an institution called school where I am from. 😁😁😁😁
I explained everything later in the early chapters, both his appearance and why an infant could kill a wild dog. and as for the achievement stuff......, I know, you are certainly right. But I can assure you that it has a purpose, and also how is it easy that it helped him realize what situation he was in 😉😉😉
I wanted to say by counting the days, but then I just remembered that the place he was in had no sun or moon so there was no way he could have known what time it was. There you have it, a mistake on my part 🙏🙏
Hmm, did you really read the first chapter or you just glossed it over. Because if you did, you will understand what it is I am talking about
I can assure you that it's fast enough, though not too fast, but moderately fast
The light from the green panel is what allowed him to see what color his hand is
Thanks for the correction
🤣🤣🤣🤣 Yes he can
Yes he did not, because he himself wasn't so immersed in it until he found out that everything happening to him was real.
I have corrected it, thanks for the reminder
Yes it should, that is totally a mistake on my part
This seemed more > obvious compared to :
He is a goblin who has leveled up several times, I felt it was okay for him to be capable of speech. Although his speech isn't something the other monsters can understand.
Thanks for the correction and yes, I do mean quills. I have made some changes to the chapter but I still do not intend on using the quill word to make it easier for the readers to understand. Not everyone understands what a quill is. For the record, I do not mean that in a bad way.