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You are right, but the truth is more complex than what he thinks.
This is the third review I am making. I keep deleting it because they all came out wrong. So for now I am just going to make a brief review and if there is any question, you can ask in the comment section.• The novel covers a world where players and high-rankers transmigrated from a virtual game world into a real world and become supreme entities such as Gods, goddesses, Demi gods and the like.About years after it happened, the main character was summoned by one of his believers. The last memory he had was of the game where he was battling his opponent for dominance. However, he was at a loss when he discovered that in this world, he was worshipped as a God as well as the other high-rankers of the game.• Writing quality: That is a point to be discussed by the readers.• Story development: It might come off as slow-paced, but that is not entirely so. The story has lots more to dive into, a series of events ready to be worked on, so no worries on that part. • Character design: In the first volume, the main character comes off as cold, indifferent to situations, edgy, rational and without ambition. That is because he is all of those. Something happened to him that changed who he was once before his transmigration. What happened will be discussed broadly in the second volume along with character growth attached to him.• Two chapters a day, one day off in a week.• World background: A cliche fantasy world with the usual fantasy creatures, guilds and adventurers.In the world, players are viewed as absolute existences such as; Gods, Goddesses, and Demi-Gods. Many more such grand entities.• I guarantee you that this will be a fun novel to work on. I await new and active readers and for the current ones, your support is much appreciated.....If there are any questions, the comment section is open for such.
Do me a favor and never try to pick up my story ever again. I hate readers like you the most. The kind that thinks he knows everything without reading the story properly. Why do monsters like kids? Read and you will get your answer. But no..... I don't want to read, I want the answers delivered to me like the sucker I am. I was even trying to be polite only to see that you did not even read the story as you should have. Again, please go away and never come back.
And also, try not to take out your frustration on my novel. Open up your mind to immersive yourself in the words written down, follow the novel and study the character and his belief of what rationality entails.Question yourself if he will forever remain rational, if, in a world where he was betrayed by his supposed comrades, he will forever retain his rationality when he is faced against them.Again, your opinion is appreciated.
A complete monster-type Mc
To get his mojo on, get himself familiar with the bow to avoid any mishap when it is time to use it in battle
Alright I agree, maybe a little bit 😂😂
Not cowardly, strategic.
For sure 👍
They are. Monster language. Those living in the dungeon have the same language irrespective of specie
Male 'Goblin' Female 'Goblina' In general 'Goblin'
You are right. Changes will be made compared to the former one.
Yes. Their vision covers more range, distance, and especially discerning when it comes to the dark as compared to any other sense.
I do not understand why people keep saying he is dumb. He is not. He is the kind of person that questions his existence, what he is, what kind of world he is in, and why he is like this. That is not called dumb. It is a person with mental issues, depicting him as a lost soul. If you are asking does he stop his questioning, yes he does. But if you are asking does he get any dumber, no, because I never wrote him as a dumb character.