AkiraMei_

No vampires

NO

Before I say anything I have to make this clear. The new novel has a lot of spice 🌶️ in it which makes it a hot read. The vivid narration of the story caught my attention and the dialogue flow smoothly leading from one scene to another. If you are okay with a story full of 🍆 and 🍑 then you are sure to enjoy this novel.

The word Mortal is some how miss leading. I thought he is going to the mortal realm, to humans but it seems there is not much difference with hell, she since they are but not humans. Also there was no build up to suggest the queen or anyone was expecting the prince of hell to come to the mortal realm. I don't even know if the queen knows he is the prince of hell, if she doesn't then why was he invited. I feel like there is a gap of blood information, between what you as the author knows and what we know.

How does he do it,I am curious 😌

Interesting 🤔

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Suggestion: If the age 14 is not significant to the plot try upgrading it to a higher number

The story shouts Adventure with every chapter you turn, Alex started as a shut-in unable to interact with the outer world but when he got sent to another world, a burning thirst for adventure emerged from within his chest, leading him to awesome adventures worthy of a read with his party mates.

The author has created a perfect blend of fantasy superpowers and guns in the novel. The mechanical writing skill is nearly perfect. When you mix that with an interesting premise surrounding 'Zai', our main character, you get a work unique enough to grab your attention until the end.