Really enjoyed reading the other story with Artoria and I'm loving the way you write the characters in such heartwrenching ways. Definitely looking to see more from this story and the others. Great work!

Easily amongst the best stories i've read with an OC in FSN. Practically feels like the MC was meant to be in the story, and nothing feels forced. Very well done!

This story is probably one of the best executed "reincarnated before the plot" stories i've read, with each of the changes being implemented into the story in a fairly smooth and not-so-forced way.

Like the writing and continuity despite just following the plot, looking to see what kind of changes there are in relationship building and background stuff, great work so far

Liking the writing style so far even if some of the text is a little repetitive and over exaggerated. Looking forward to seeing more of this take on the Honkai world

Very interesting premise, and its interesting to read a fic where the story covers a part of the canon where the main story didn't cover. Though I am excited to see how the MC will act when they reach canon.

Very promising story, its nice to read something with good grammar for a change. Hoping for more updates!

The premise of the story is great, but as with the mc seems to lack meaningful connections and relationships with the other characters (with the exception of vivian), I cant help but look forward to the moment Arthur starts interacting with the rest of the cast. All in all though, the story is great, and im looking forward to the next chapter