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Loose_Pen

Loose_Pen

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Novice with an imagination going haywire

2022-06-29 JoinedCanada
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    This novel is really expressive with emotions which makes it easier to empathize with the character’s plight. Also each one has a certain depth that will draw readers in to care about and cheer for them. Great work!

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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Replied to NovaEre

    Thanks for noticing and bringing it up.

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    Chaos Path
    Fantasy · Loose_Pen
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    I think this book embodies a lot of emotions from the characters. The characters that are easy to sympathize with making this a more surreal and immersive experience reading through this well written book. Aside from the intriguing plot, it’s what I look for when reading a romance novel and this one displays it beautifully.

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    dr1
    History · HairySquid
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Although there are only 3 chapters as of this review, each chapter presents its own enticing scene that will draw readers in. Well written novel!

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    Tales of the Ruler
    Fantasy · TheOmnipotentOne
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Wow the MC just draws readers in to understand his thinking process. Very well written story.

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    Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake
    Fantasy · ThePotatoKing
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Wow the suspense really draws readers in and makes them want to know more about the characters. Speaking of which, each character is unique with a myriad of various emotions that shape the plot into something beautifu that makes you not want to put the book down.

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    The Reddest Red
    Fantasy · blossoms_hkhk
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    These characters each with various personalities will definitely draw in readers. It’s very interesting to see how each one tackles their problems and scheme against one another. Definitely worth a read.

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    Snow n' Starlight
    Fantasy · Sakura_Charmash
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Commented

    Seol is going to turn out to be an interesting character alright.

    Ch 18 Taskmaster
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    Snow n' Starlight
    Fantasy · Sakura_Charmash
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    These characters are incredibly interesting and have depth. My general impression of the story is one with lots of twist and turns and non stop excitement in the coming chapters. :)

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    The Shadowking's Sin(Shadoukingu No Tsumi)
    Fantasy · Mrtin_Monarch
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Replied to angel_ari

    Ok I’ll thanks, I’ll see what I can do with the world building.

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    Chaos Path
    Fantasy · Loose_Pen
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Replied to angel_ari

    Thanks for the review. But I want to know which parts did you find boring in the first 3 chapters? Please tell me. Thanks!

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    Chaos Path
    Fantasy · Loose_Pen
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Hooked instantly to this story line. It really leaves you wanting more and wanting to know what happens next. Definitely worth a read. Even if the genre doesn’t interest you, the presentation of the story will. From the language usage to the flow of the story, everything fits together to provide readers with an immersive experience.

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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Commented

    Interesting twist that sets up a premise with the potential to last a long time. But how does he know the names of the people he just woke up to? Last sentence.

    Ch 2 Chapter 02: His Identity
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    A Knight's Honour
    Fantasy · BunnyStar
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    I think it’s a fun read. Although there are only 2 chapters as of this review, I believe that it will be a fun journey seeing what the demon emperor has in store. Keep writing :)

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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Demon Emperor
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Replied to Fish_by_the_sea

    Thank you very much :)

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    Chaos Path
    Fantasy · Loose_Pen
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Nice read. Interesting story line that has relatable characters

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    Fighting Destiny
    Fantasy · Megan_Immanuella
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Interesting romance novel with relatable characters, but could use a bit more showing and imagery. Other than that it’s a lovely read.

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    To love William Carter
    Urban · Debbie_Asan
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Interesting story premise that has lots of potential to grow. Just check the grammar for some parts. But it’s a delightful read.

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    A Knight's Honour
    Fantasy · BunnyStar
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  • Loose_Pen
    Loose_Pen1yr
    Posted

    Like all great WEBNOVEL authors, here comes the shameless review. But if you have any questions or find and mistakes, feel free to leave them in the comments. Also here are some things readers should know. What is it about? Read to find out :). JK. Adding on to the synopsis, Its about someone who rediscovers his past lives and taking revenge on those who wronged him, but the problem lies within uncovering who truly wronged him. What type of person is the main character? Well, he’s currently joyful but pessimistic, cynical but understanding, and open-minded but decisive. You’ll understand. And will only become more diverse as the story progresses. Also if you are wondering whether there will be romance in this Novel. Yes. Harem? Maybe, maybe not. Anyways if you read Chaos path and like it, please share with others, add to your collection or donate a power stone or two. Enjoy!

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    Chaos Path
    Fantasy · Loose_Pen
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