Amazing chapter!

So far so good. I really like that it takes place during the time of Roger and his crew instead of Luffy's. The only thing I would criticize is that there is too much narration instead of having conversations.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks👍

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Thanks

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Pretty well. Grammar is good as well👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

Thanks a lot