😔 author why aren’t you releasing the 4 chapters

“FUCK” IS A COMPLETE TURN OFF IN A NOVEL. Don’t use F word everywhere. It takes away beauty and novelty from the story. Second don’t use modern culture reference in medieval or ancient type culture.

The thing is I don’t understand how in a place filled with magic a mother could die of childbirth. Truth be told when I first started reading this novel I thought it was a normal medieval theme novel so I didn’t think much of a mother dying of childbirth, but as the story keeps going on the grandma started showing magical means and medical pills etc. I find it hard to believe that the grandma fails to prepare to bring pill and magical medicine for her precious daughter in case things go wrong with the childbirth. And we still haven’t gotten a reasonable explanation about this topic. For this major plot hole this novel is a major failure.

This is one of the worst illogical novel I have ever read in my life. I don’t see any logic in the hatred of the heroins for the villain. I mean even if they really betray the villain it has to be for something right. One of the heroins was ever written to love the villian with all her heart yet she still betrayed him because some stranger told her. This is one of the funniest reason to betray someone no. This novel is made to help masochist vent their anger on heroines and heroes who have been logically downgraded. I have seen plenty brainless heroes and heroins but they still betray for benefit. Never have I seen a heroine written as the most brain dead character just to satisfy the frustration and revenge fetish of reader and author. Another point is the lack of reasoning in the villain, they have been with him all this time and this is the first time he knew they would betray him lol, is he even qualified to be called a villain. He literally have all the power except a brain, frankly for me the hero and heroines are much more wise than him. The author draws the villain as a person betrayed by the heroines he saved and only one person truly cares for him. It can be easy to fool beginner readers with this foolish synopsis but seasoned readers like myself will easily be able to see the flaws. If he was betrayed that means he is a dumb villain, he can’t see reason and let people take advantage of him. I would never pity such an idiotic villain ever. He had a whole book to establish a good image uncover secrets but he was led by the nose from the beginning to end. Is it even interesting to read about such an idiot. An idiot who needs two lives to think properly. The only good thing about this novel is writing quality(5/5). I sometimes sigh for those authors who have good story but no writing quality 🥲

The story was ok until the third chapter(although I don’t like pov I persisted with it). But in the third chapter we get a female dragon for the MC who is a boy. That’s a big no no for me if the Mc is a girl it would make sense but for a boy that’s very sissy. I mean is she supposed to be banged by every dragon they meet along the way 🤓. In the original book Male dragons have always represented strength(bellarion), while the female are also strong they tend to be represented as cute and most of the time weaker than males. So for me this is not a good dragon match for a male MC. Unless he is a sissy ofcourse.

Wouldn’t increasing skill level indirectly level his cultivation?

What about the years he spent on research after the one year? Did he also get skills for those years?

I am having a hard time to comprehend how a cultivator with a super high talent struggle against someone with low low talent in the same realm. I honestly thought he could fight him by jumping realms. What a letdown 🤦‍♂️

Yes, and I even ignored most of the mistakes made by the author. I highly do not recommend this if you are a critical reader, If you are reading to pass time and don't care for unfair cliches you can read it.

Thanks for replying, that's quite sad to hear. No worries, you will keep improving. Nobody seemed to give feedback regarding this, and I had to say, so you won't be kept blind. Just trying to be constructive. Best of luck.

Hello, thanks for replying. First, this is my alt account so I understand why you think I am a bad reader. Second, I never actually did read most of those 160 books and just got into them to check if I wanted to read them. Third, I never did comment anything toxic at first, I read some chapters and made constructive criticism which the author kept deleting. So I had no choice but to retaliate for the author being so unreasonable. Honestly speaking I personally do not think that there is anyone who spends more time reading a single chapter as me. I read in depth and that's why I often find a lot of mistakes. I have a basic requirements for the novel I read which is to keep it logical in respect to the novel. For example if the author goes against what he said before I make a constructive criticism to point out his mistakes. You just started accusing me instead of asking why I made such a comment. I do not want to judge you, but in the future, it is best if you ask before accusing someone.

Hello, I know no one can see this comment. Piece of advice for you, if you want readers to be attracted to your novel it's always good to be respectful and transparent. If you continue to act like this even without the type of people who leave warning in the comments people will not be willing to stay here. Even if most people in web novels are not bright they can still put two and two after seeing that your novel lacks criticism. Goodbye

this is justice to readers who were duped by you.

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If anyone is reading this, save yourself some brain cells. This is a failed product of a novel. I have tried to contact the author, but he doesn't seem to care about us lowly readers. He even deleted my review which was actually 3 stars by the way and it was far more than what this trash of a novel deserved. Also, he gave no explanation as to why he deleted my review, guess he got insecure because I gave the coldest truth to readers. Why an insecure author, but your bad luck is you cant delete this one hahaaahaahaaa. Jocks on you 🥸🥸🥸. Btw if you don't believe me feel free to endure, maybe you might end up losing some IQ on the way😄😄 Author kun here is my review(0 stars🤡) feel free to delete it 🤓🤓🤡🤡. The insecure author deleted it again🤓🤓🤡🤡. If I was a clown and just speaking nonsense why would you delete this 🤓🤓. It's not a review after all. Guess I should shut my mouth and take it all. I'll save readers' brain cells, they can't fall victim here. I'll update it every time you delete it. we'll see who is more persistent. You deleted again 🤡🤡 .well. I just updated it.🥸🤓

Thanks for replying., but you did delete my comment. If you didn't delete it, I would never have had to do this. I am a very respectful reader, but that only applies if the author respects me as well as a reader. Anyways sorry if I said something that made you provoked. I was never trying to quit, just looking for a response so that I won't be disappointed in the future.

This is justice for new readers and those whose voice wasn't heard

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