Review Detail of Shytes_Buys in Cultivator With Modern AI

This novel is definitely better than most of the novels out there. The problem is grammar. To be frank, I had to correct a lot of errors in my brain throughout my reading. The grammar error I noticed the most is the repeated use of name characters at the end of a dialogue statement. For instance, "It's real, mom" and "I am really serious, mom" appear in a single sentence or paragraph. This could have been written as "Mom, it's real. I am really serious.". The use of pronouns would also make things better. Sometimes using name characters is also not needed, as the reader already knows who the speaker is referring to. When names are repeated for every or most dialogue it makes the script unreadable or makes the reader uncomfortable. Author, If you are struggling with grammar, I suggest reaching out to an expert to examine your writing to avoid these errors. Other than grammar issues, the novel seems reasonable.