Chad stopped being Chad and became a Beto bitch. I won't even start reading this, I'll just leave an angry comment here for ruining a story that could have been completed in 2-3 chapters and enjoyed a wonderful aftertaste. It's a good thing the author jumped off the bridge, Beta Bitch-sama.

The story was strong 5, not counting the dialogues, which were not there. But it all went down to 1, because of the ending. There is no point in the quality of the writing, the characters and the world if everything the character has achieved is simply thrown away. This is the NTR of the main character in the social, strength and mental sense. You know, if I knew the ending of the story, I simply wouldn’t start reading it.

I am the one who abandoned history because of another imposed slave system. Everything was fine and wonderful until the moment where the system forces him to “steal Natasha’s heart.” In fact - slavery of the main character and a huge fine for nothing if he fails to do this. And I don’t like Natasha, as an almost 100-year-old whore (It’s not because she’s Russian, I’m Russian myself!) It’s simply physically impossible to imagine a relationship with a progmatic, callous, professional spy woman.

I have read this to the end. It's really a good story. I love it when the main character suffers and breaks through the hardships and there is 100% suffering, effort and planning in this book. I recommend it to all beginner gardeners!

The best soup ever. With sour cream and black bread. I advise all non-Russians to try it.

I would give 4.5 stars maybe 5 stars. Beautiful text, hero, narration, new secrets, but there is one pain No: He kills pirates, kills other people, but always protects the main pirate, from whom there should be a reward. This is such stupidity that it's just terrible. They scream at him that they will take revenge, kill his loved ones, find his house and so on, and he just ignores it. Rapists, murderers, extortionists, arsonists, just weak trash will be spared. The first time, I ignored it, but the second time, when he even sewed his leg back on, cured him and stuff? Just disgustingly illogical, as for Vlad Dracula, he never spared his enemies and their families. Ugh. If it will be 3 times, even despite the beautiful text, the magnificent character and the living world, I will give it up and, to be honest, I really don’t want to.

And it's always annoying. The protagonist who can't live his life and immediately decides to "not change the plot". It's disgusting. Some stupid fan, not the main character. This is not Naruto, where if you do something the world will end or the same Dragon Ball. This is One Piece. Have fun, drink, kill, become a lookout, rape, break people, fishermen, minks or create havoc, but don't be that kind "pirate" who helps everyone, not himself, motherfucker.

It's well written. The main character is bright and likable. But there will always be shit. Let's start with my main claim: The main character gives his fruit to Logia and it is no longer Ace. 2. He goes to Nami's village and kills Arlong, and then when she wants to join his team, he says in all seriousness that he does not want to break the canon, when he already killed Arlong and for some reason takes Nami's sister with him, which, according to the canon, does not understand navigation. And here is the most interesting thing, why do you write fanfiction and everything else, if, in fact, everything will be the same as in the canon, only with a stronger main character? The author also justifies himself in the comments that, without Nami, Luffy will die and so on.

On principle, I will put 1 star, because reading the reviews I found dozens of 5 stars from 1 person.

I just couldn't read further. The main character is so naive and stupid that it's just terrible. His tongue is too long and without a purpose he shares information, climbs where he is not asked. Taking risks for no apparent purpose. With his cheat, you could make everything 10 times better, but no. He does not feel sorry for killing people, but he does feel sorry for selectively some. I give 2 stars for the writing style and 1 star for the main character. Terrible. I do not advise.

This is a country! A country with tens of millions of inhabitants!

No one would work if they still had to give away all the trophies from the pirates. Okay, I accepted that you need to give about 50% of the reward, but the treasures would not be given!

I have read this and it is already an indicator. Let's start with the pros: Lots of text. Well-written lore and knowledge of the author of one piece. Not too bad grammar. Now let's move on to the cons: The protagonist does not kill enemies, for some reason always leaving alive the strong, who can and will take revenge on him. It feels like the author is a child who is not even some 20 years old, because all the characters think rather narrowly. Terrible Chinese. All these "yonko" stages, black bones and everything. Not to mention certain words and expressions. In fact, following the story. The main character hasn't changed anything, hasn't changed anything, doesn't kill anyone significant out of principle, why? "This is my brilliant plan!" Which, by the way, was not explained to us. The strengths of the main character - the author immediately apes and nerfs. What is it for? He has super regeneration, able to close holes in the body in seconds, grow limbs, restore organs. Super strength is above Kaido's peak and stamina is also above it. But a young whitebeard without buffs is still cooler, with a weaker will. I put 3 stars.

I read it and at one moment I understood something. The protagonist does not behave like a real leader, but like a teenager spewing nonsense. Everything is easy for him, he is the smartest, most beautiful, cool, arrogant. Did you find an immon fruit? I'll just create the same, but without the cons. Plenty of holes in the plot, illogical actions. What else to talk about when he tells everyone the knowledge that, in principle, he could not know. The dumbest thing is that he recruits people into his "family" or team. There is no disclosure of characters, only some stupid words at the wrong time and place. He behaves like an ordinary person, puts himself in a position equal to any other person, but at the same time considers himself superior to everyone and all that. In general, this wild dissonance infuriated the entire fanfic.

In Russia, we have some kind of doctor about whom they even filmed an issue: the guy could literally stop his heart or speed it up to 160-180 beats per minute. It was even connected to a heartbeat sensor. He did all this just by sitting in one place and talking to people.

This is some shit. The main character does not travel, but simply trains everyone and that's it. All pirates mostly drink, relax, have fun, and he trains, trains and trains and at the same time has a system, but still does not have super powers. He acts so slowly, as if he has an infinite lifespan, but he doesn't. Yes, he does not even look at women or does not find friends. Stupid man trainer. I came to read about adventure, the path of the sword, murder and freedom. This is not the world of naruto, where everyone will end, if there is no naruto, this is one piece, the world of pirates, bitch! It would be nice if the author showed all this, but no. He just talks. Kobe for half a year became a man capable of surviving paradise, but here the main tear lived but without a goal. The main character does not have a worthy goal, his mother! 50% shanks power = getting punched in the face by some extras that only learned one will of weaponry. Go, fuck, kill, fight, have fun, fuck, at least rape women and children, I don't give a shit! But do at least something other than training passing characters who will not be later! Man, fucking coach! And now the score: The quality of the writing is not bad, the world is not very open, there are no new secrets and other things, the usual one piece. The characters are the same, there is no depth. The main character himself is an elf-cultivator trainer.

Very slow writing. 70 chapters - meeting with Sanji. The hero is strong and cool, yes, but... What's the point? The plot is the same as the manga. No really changes, except for some reason a smarter hero with afterthoughts and more power. In general, if you want to read the same one piece only with a slightly different Luffy, then you are here, if not? Drop it.

That's all. Now he's somebody's dog Good doggy.

What else to expect from a low-grade author? Of course, we will do a forced plot, because we can not think of anything better. Serum Kills everyone? Okay, but the enemy of the protagonist will give a super bonus to strength, ugh.

Lasted up to 110+ chapters. It just couldn't take it anymore. The main character does not act logically. His character skips like a squirrel under the grass. He makes himself look so cool, but at the same time he always makes excuses, even when it's not necessary. Constantly playing the card of pity, it would be at least of high quality, but no! The story is very boring, I don’t know what I was expecting, but there is nothing interesting, they don’t show us, they tell us. 2 stars, I do not advise waiting for it to "get better" after the start.