Bulletic

Yes, I think you're right. I don't know why 20 people agreed with me lol

*vice

Great story so far! I’ve read the 5 chapters that have been released so far and they did a good job on keeping me hooked. I‘m exited to see what happens next. The charcters are great, the writing is well done, and the sc-fi elements are both original and interesting. This looks professional! Good job author.

"watching life" --> "watching live"

I'm guessing that death in the SPs means that you have to pay to revive your character? I can't imagine that you'd die in real life...

Everyone's acting like doing 50 puch ups' easy. I barely know anyone (myself included) that can do more then 20 puch ups in a row.

As a french, I’m not ashamed to admit that I have never heard that word before in my life.

Ok well you deleted that fast… and I got signed out right after writing this. ?

Sure. I respect your point. Violence towards a child is wrong imo, and he had to resort to injuring his son because he failed at educating him properly at an early age. That’s why I said in a previous comment ´violence is the last refuge of the incompetent’

Edit: rep by pop isn’t the proper term. I just mean that it should be counted by what portion of the country’s population is sent instead of actual numbers.