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DaoistlUWJvR1yrReplied to Nekomiko_succubus*it’s called being loyal. She is and isn’t loyal at the same time . It’s kind of hard to explain
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*your husband is dead why do you need to be so hesitant
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Tbh the story is alright and interesting however many mistakes were made when it comes to the grammatical aspects. Sometimes sentences either aren’t finished or there is the wrong usage of certain words or just misspellings. If you’re willing to look over this issue you may like this book. I recommend reading the first chapters and then deciding.
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Sweat
Hearing the sweat manly voice in her head, Erin came back from heaven, and realized that she was peering at Alex without flickering! She couldn't help but panic. - DaoistlUWJvR1yrCommented
The Baby in the future:
"Sakura we both know that one drink won't hurt the baby, so it's fine." Tsunade said as she handed the cup to Sakura. - DaoistlUWJvR1yrCommentedWell, now that he was ten, his parents told him to have his own room. And they did make a room for him, but it was so lonely there. What was he supposed to do in a room alone? Doing solo calisthenics? No thank you.
- DaoistlUWJvR1yrCommentedAldred was too stunned to speak. 'Who is this beautiful woman?
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Nice! Very desirable body👀
•Gamer's Body (Passive) - DaoistlUWJvR1yrCommentedAfter a small flash of light, their eyes dim, and they turn around and head back to their group further away who also have dim eyes. Yeah, that was a memory wiping rune. My inspiration? Men in Black. Hehehe…
- DaoistlUWJvR1yrCommentedHe was muttering, 'The JoJo poses which should have made them chad, made them even cuter.
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The story seems nice and interesting however the grammar is what made me give up on this story. Just by reading the first chapter you notice the amount of basic mistakes the author makes, which of course is unacceptable for a novel in English. If you’re keen on reading this story because of the description, you should read the first chapter and decide for yourself whether you want to continue reading it!