The story seems nice and interesting however the grammar is what made me give up on this story. Just by reading the first chapter you notice the amount of basic mistakes the author makes, which of course is unacceptable for a novel in English. If you’re keen on reading this story because of the description, you should read the first chapter and decide for yourself whether you want to continue reading it!
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