don't worry I got the authors'sback

well, who doesn't like talking and hearing to themselves and about me even seeing what I am writing than you should know that even if my English is little good but I have problems with punctuation marks so I am sorry if you find it unreadable.

Haha thanks you for your love and support and as for update I am currently writing it so it'll be up on platform before 6:00PM (Indian time) and as i have already told before I am new to this so I can only write 1 chapter a day and max 2 chapters a day but when I'll get used to typing fast i start mass release so please 🙏 support me and I also have to spell check and proofread to find any mistakes so it takes time so please be patience comment if you find any mistakes that'll be huge help

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Hey, I'm sorry author but I am dropping this because this story looks to forced I don't know it's either because of the story line or because is the vocabulary but the story seems forced to me like it's moving without any Syntex so I am dropping this and don't worry I will come again when this story will be re-edited so see you till then

Well, the story till now was very eye-catching and was great to read the concept of not being a normal mob but a mafia mob who is not free but heavily restricted from the start is also new. And as I see it this story have tremendous amount of capaycity to grow, and i don't know about the future but till now the explaining of the characters and their side story did not make me feel like that the story is detached from the mc because in most story when showing side character story they detached themselves from the main story frame. The grammar is good 👍. Story devlopment till now was also good. But I did think that the chapters are a bit small but the update stability is fare so Idk. If you haven't decided upon reading this than give it a try.

Well let's talk about the story devlopment, the author used the timeline very perfectly to match and develop the story. Secondly is the grammar which I think is so much better and you will not find any problem reading it I mean there was a there was once a time where he repeated a name two times but otherwise there is not major problem with grammar part. And up until now the update stability is also good and honestly I liked that asteroid in the shape of truck that was honestly good 👍 and the world choice is perfect I mean there is everything you need to learn in goblin Slayer for an upcoming adventurer and also to introduce the mc to the dark side of the world and that's why I think goblin Slayer is a perfect choice for the 1st world.keep it up author-San and give us chapter

Hey man why you said so I mean the author did said that this story is just starting and soon new ark will be introduced so don't just kill your hopes because it's a wonderful story until now and will continue to be so in future i hope and thanks to author i came to know this wonderful song named "bonds" by Yasuhara Takanadhi and as i am more of a novel guy i have not watched boruto as everyone was saying it's trashy so i came to learn about this masterpiece is all ready good enough for me and keep your hopes up man who knows what the author has stored for us in future.

Well i was also like you but after continuing to read every chapter i came to love this fanfic so do give it a try

Well you made a mistake in status his charm was 13 not 12

Well you just basically skipped all power leveling than how dare you say that mc got op too quickly it was you who did not wrote those chapters and did not go creative route like introducing something new to the story i know this story is just for you to get over your grandpa's death but at least you can put some effort in it or you could have also just continued with the current setting and than you can send MC to the world were divinity is nothing and is sold like cabbage so he will not be op but extra strong in a sense I mean the only way to write a fic of Twilight is by writing in slow pace but you just time skipped everything and this is not how you do things and i honestly think you need some time for yourself give yourself some time to rest like go Solo camping or hiking which will connect you with nature and fresh your mind because i know much it hurts when you lose someone you consider like your parents and it happened to me 2 times in 7 months gape like is that a joke 🤣 but now i came in terms with those feelings just sit alone in nature and let those salt water flow out and be happy for them and smile 😊 because that's what they want to see on your face. Good luck

Bro that's Called plot armour not talent but luffy does poses high talent for haki but don't forget those Marines who even without devil fruit power and just with haki and training are overpowered just like luffys Gramps. So that's plot armour not highest talent. I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings.

Author-san your wording is truly fabulous 🤩 this is a kind of novel where even those with less creative mind can think of the image in their mind with the words help and for likes of me who have extremely good imagination it's like watching movie but in your mind and the words you wrote truly deleverd the image of a noblesse "he who brings judgement and harmony" . Your skills in writing is truly exceptional please do tell me if you have any other account where you upload novels you write, please.

I AM SORRY i am not a fan of NTR I mean I know there's not proper NTR here but i don't like even a hint of it in my reading preference and i don't mean it only from a male character liking pov but also if it's female main character based as I have little psychopathic tendency i like when even if mc does found out then he make her life miserable instantly and not just play with her games. I mean like what's stopping me from shooting a 7mm in both of there's body on my own property. i am rich, just make them vanish from the world i Mean like this World doesn't have mana or ki,qi or any supernatural element to save her or him from me I mean death serve all well and what is there that money can't solve. And don't take me seriously that's how I am. So sorry if it hurts somebody.

I am sorry author-san but i am gonna drop this because i don't know why but i hate Fate series to its core and i never read any fanfiction about Fate as I just don't like it i am sorry but seriously you're skills are quite good and may God bless you with more power stone (if you know what I mean 😂)

WTF dude at least read it first and then sprout your baseless critic about the book. I can't say that the grammer was 10/10 but it was at least 07/10 in starting chapters and then it constantly improved and now its 8.4/10 from me and what else would you aspect from a single being you need to understand that he/she does not have any editors so there can be some mistakes and regarding the story being clitch then i think the story progression is better than others and at least the author put at least 25 chapter minimum in character development and that was done just like professional and if that's not a good read than i think the problem is with you. !!!peace!!! Hope you find your readable book with likeable MC that will not hurt you physically. (don't take the GIF offensively)

My brother all you told us is completely right but you need to understand that this is au in here you can even show voldamort love struck with harmonie or with prof mcgonagall or he did all this because his wife was killed by normal humans because she was witch so all i want to day is the normal logic does bot apply here. Have a good day.

My bro you just have to give it one killing blow and only the magic Stone will be left and the cirpse will be turned into dust and also kobalds are mire powerful than gobline and so they give more attributes than gobline.

Bro if your writing a fanfic than please at least do some research on that world in danmachi after giving killing blow the Monsters turn into dust and the dungeon absorb them and also there there is no guide about how to cut the monsters to get there core and tge second thing is the adventurer continue to get stronger as they kill monster and the only thing the god do is encrease you limit by simply taking you to next levels. At least do some research regarding the World your fic is based on