Review Detail of Flaiver in ATG: Heavenly Procrastinator

I don't know why all the reviews are 5 stars without details. Maybe it will get better further, but to be honest, after chapter 1 I don’t want to read further. The dialogue is weird and the plot is too forced. He just moved in and on the same day he was beaten, then cured and expelled from the family and even beaten. Could you choose a non-cliché start without a beating and revenge afterwards? A strange feeling from fanfic, I don’t know, I can read another chapter, but so far there is no desire.