Review Detail of charreos in I Guess, Another World is Really Different
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it was bad, had high hopes for this but its pretty much unreadable, the grammar is awful and the MC is unlikeable, it physically hurt me to read this, if the author reads this here are tips: 1. practice english, how people talk and how sentences are made 2. start to think about little details, having him beat to death with broken bones means he needs to survive with broken bones and not suddenly healed after a time skip 3. the plot is cliche and boring, it feels like every other power fantasy with cliche characters and cliche place, open your horizons and search for a what could be, what if the thug was accually a good person that acts like he does because he needs money for his sick mother? thats pretty much it, I have more problems with this but these are the 3 big ones I think you should follow. until a full rewrite I will say its not worth reading
I Guess, Another World is Really Different
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WTF dude at least read it first and then sprout your baseless critic about the book. I can't say that the grammer was 10/10 but it was at least 07/10 in starting chapters and then it constantly improved and now its 8.4/10 from me and what else would you aspect from a single being you need to understand that he/she does not have any editors so there can be some mistakes and regarding the story being clitch then i think the story progression is better than others and at least the author put at least 25 chapter minimum in character development and that was done just like professional and if that's not a good read than i think the problem is with you. !!!peace!!! Hope you find your readable book with likeable MC that will not hurt you physically. (don't take the GIF offensively)
Cha_D_Bear:"terrible, barely readable. 3 stars", give it the one star it deserves then.