Romance will be slow and won't be the main focus of the story. As for harem, There will only be one love interest I personally don't enjoy harem stories so I have no interest in writing one.

I'm already hooked! I am a huge sucker for anything myth/historical exploration related so I can't wait to see how this story continues. Another great thing is the large mix of characters that really help bring the world to life. Having multiple characters that can seamlessly bounce off each other makes the conversations very enjoyable. overall great novel, ill be adding it to my library and waiting for future chapters!

Although the sentence structure could use a bit of work, This novel did a great job of getting me hooked right from the beginning. The mc has an interesting personality and combined with the quick pace of the story, the story was very captivating

Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!

Thanks a lot for your review! it means a lot.

thanks for leaving a review it helps a lot! In terms of the game system being simple, a lot of similar novels I've read feel the need to share the main leads system constantly almost in every chapter. Although I don't mind that, I wanted to take away the focus a little from constantly looking at stats and let the main focus of the story be Wyatts exploration of the world.

Character interactions are actually what i was most nervous about since I was afraid they wouldn't flow naturally :O hearing you enjoyed them helps a lot with my confidence so thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a review!

Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!

So far this has been a very interesting read with an incredibly refreshing twist of martial arts stories by mixing it in with a more modern financial world. The fact that not everyone can be solved just by beating someone else up really helps ground the world and help lead the story in a compelling direction overall a great story with a lot of potential and I cant wait to read more in the future!

Truthfully this is far from my usual genre of choice but I decided to give it a review anyways! So far the author has done a good job of creating a strong contrast between the female and male leads. Having characters that aren't afraid to be rude or dumb at times also helps keep the story refreshing and adds a sense of lightheartedness to the overall story. I think this story has potential to grow into something very enjoyable as the author continues to improve their comfortability writing. For advice, I noticed that when I searched your novel you don't have any tags. Tags are perhaps the best way for people to find novels similar to ones they already enjoy so I highly recommend you add some. The second tip would be that in romance or non action stories, in general, a lot of the readers overall enjoyment comes from reading about the environment around the main lead. So I think if the author were to spend a little more time describing some of the little things in my detail it could help captivate readers even more. Im far from a romance story expert, but i hope my review helps a bit!

A fun twist of a popular genre! Well written and with quick pace this novel easily grabbed my attention making me want to read more. The story is also well written and very easy to follow. The magic system within the story is also a refreshing read when compared to many others. Overall a good story that's worth a read

A fun youthful story with an energetic and charismatic lead! This is a very enjoyable read. I also like how all the friends have unique personalities which really helps bring the world to life through their interactions.

This novel is definitely worth the read! The conversations between characters are very fluid and enjoyable to read, The pace of the story is also well balanced with plenty of stuff happening. Another thing is the system already seems more fun than some other novels with its mix of sarcasm.

pfft being a good king is overrated!! This novel is very well written and the story flows perfectly from scene to scene making it an enjoyable read. The pace of the story also works well with the plot! cant wait to read more!

This story has been very fun to read so far! Almost immediately we are thrown into a struggling invasion which quickly caught my attention. I really love casey and lanes interactions they are hilarious together and bounce off each other perfectly! Cant wait to read more in the future, You have a great novel on your hands!

GRANDMAMA SUPREMACY! Every chapter is packed with detailed events and all the characters are beautifully fleshed out. The events of the novel flow perfectly from scene to scene which helps bring the character's interactions to life even more. Im a big fan of these genres and cant wait to read more of this in the future. You got yourself a fan!

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm still trying to improve and you saying my conversations aren't awkward helps a lot since that's my biggest struggle so far. I appreciate the advice and will try to add more detail in the future

first of all holy $%^# Right at the beginning of the novel we are thrown into a beautifully chaotic scene which gave me just enough backstory about the world to make me long for more information. Every scene is perfectly described making the novel really come to life as I read these first few chapters. Even with a tragic storyline so far the author has done a great job of not making it feel overwhelming. Truthfully there isn't much to say besides 10/10 start and I can't wait till more chapters release in the future so I can witness Alex's journey. PS: I burst out laughing when he jumped out the window with his normal body, hurting himself

no problem, glad to help! yes i love zeus and he does a great job of bringing balance to blakes life and keeping the story a bit happier. and for the paragraphs once I switched over to my computer the story felt more fluid but since a lot of readers only use their phones I think changing it up could help a bit

Hi! ive been wanting to make time to review this since you reviewed mine not long ago and now I finally have a chance! this is my first time writing a review so sorry if its all over the place. I've read up to chapter 21 as of this review pros: to start off I really enjoy the addition of Zeus into blakes life. I think often times when a main character goes through multiple gloomy experiences during the story its very hard to balance it out and bring them emotional stability. I think zues in a way has become that anchor for blakes emotions by his ability to uplift his mood through a couple of lines here and there. Blake as a character is clearly holding a lot of his emotions bottled up and I'm sure as the story progresses, we will see him open up more. This story does a good job of making the reader worry about blakes mental instability as if we are a part of his family. so far I have enjoyed the mystery of the world and cant wait till Blake dives deeper into his fathers past. cons: as for cons the biggest thing I can think of is to try to separate everything into smaller paragraphs. I read the first 10 chapters on my phone and it can be hard to understand stuff sometimes. I actually have this problem as well and lately i have found that going back and just separating certain sentences can make the overall flow of the story appear much more fluid overall I enjoyed the story so far and cant wait to see your improvement and blakes journey