Review Detail of MrBtheNovelist in Primal online
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Hey there~ Read the first 5 chapters so far and the main thing that stood out was that the novel is easy on the eyes, good dialogue and pacing = effortless read. I also want to add that putting an ingame system into words can be tough at times, but you have made it neat and easy to understand. Good Job m8
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thanks for leaving a review it helps a lot! In terms of the game system being simple, a lot of similar novels I've read feel the need to share the main leads system constantly almost in every chapter. Although I don't mind that, I wanted to take away the focus a little from constantly looking at stats and let the main focus of the story be Wyatts exploration of the world.