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The mc was level 16 when he was 6 years old and had only hunted a few slimes and then he becomes an adventurer and completes numerous quests for 6 whole years and grows to level 24 ? That is just frustrating. He has a 10x system which gives 10 times more exp and he leveled up 11 times after solely dedicating to being an adventurer ? I was honestly liking the story but that time skip paints a bitter taste in my mouth

If you turn off your brain to get over the plot holes, you might find it full-filling at the least. [img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp]

Liked your other novel, but this is a little too different than the canon, You just changed his entire personality and hate he has for mito. I mean, kurama even wanted to kill naruto as an infant to escape

Well, he's a pretty good hokage tho. Like if the president of a country favors his own child more than the country then he's simply not fit to be the president. It's the same with him.

Aren't they like classmates from the past year ?

Will he follow the canon throughout the story ?

But why ? If he has the power to easily neutralize them, then why would you make him follow the plot without any reason ?

It was going good but this chapter is way too summarized. I mean why did you pace up the plot so much in a single chapter.

I've read upto 20 chapters and i've to say I personally cannot imagine naruto like this. It would be okay if it was a reincarnator but i just cannot imagine someone like naruto cursing fuck this and fuck that every other chapter.

It's getting kind of disappointing that he's never even trying his best. Will it be like this for the rest of the novel ?