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Fgs_Chrome1mthCommentedThe difference between stealth and concealed presence is basically with stealth you can still be seen or hear/smell them while concealed presence takes that away if I'm correct.
Skills- Sharingan lvl 3, swordsmanship (A), Archery (A), Medicine (B), Trap Making (A), Stealth (A), Concealed Presence (S)- Fgs_Chrome4mthCommented
ophis from dxd lol
( A loli dressed in black!) - Fgs_Chrome7mthReplied to Master_Celestial
right I was like. How. When. i dont remember reading about him having one lol.
Beads of my sweat dripped to the ground. The stone flooring made of bricks became my bed as I forced myself to stand up. I could feel the tail on my back limp, as if mirroring my current feelings. - Fgs_Chrome9mthReplied to Rock_Drake
what can I say lol I'm in a good mood today.
Chapter 7 - Fgs_Chrome9mthReplied to Rock_DrakeCh 5 Chapter 5
- Fgs_Chrome9mthReplied to Rock_DrakeCh 4 Chapter 4
- Fgs_Chrome1yrCommentedCh -2 Power System
- Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
BANG! BANG! BANG! SHOTS FIRED!!!!
Thirdly, I hope you are not hypocrites raising issues of morality when many of you have read worse. - Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
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And at last, for the very first time. No one laughed when they heard his name. (A/N: Press F in the chat.) - Fgs_Chrome1yrReplied to Atlas_123
true but remember she gets stronger when she's mad and also gets stronger the more she kills. this is most likely her default strength. Not her true strength.
Strength: 39 - Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
I've already read way past this chapter but I just gotta say one thing. BEST MOM EVER.
Just so he can start another in a new world. - Fgs_Chrome1yrPosted
Honestly, To much freaking details and explanations. like seriously. I'm glad you know your stuff and all but making entire chapters basically info dump kills the story fast. it's fine to give a brief explanation but don't use the entire freaking chapter. The story had an interesting concept and was looking forward to reading it but not so much anymore. only like 5 chaps at most and I'm already dropping it because I hate info dumps. If you don't mind that kind of thing then this might be a good story for you. Heck I don't even mind slow building stories as long as it's entertaining and doesn't have mile long explanations. That's why I'm giving a lot a 3 because I neither like nor hate this story other than the fact I'm dropping it. My suggestion to you author is to not put to much information and explanations in the chapters. If we are curious about something, then we can look it up to find out ourselves. Not hating on ya but just giving some advice. I'm a writer to though I don't post stories online because I don't want to have to get a schedule to upload chaps. Anyways, good luck and enjoy.
- Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
interesting way to start a story with a synopsis as well. well done my friend.
And so, the protagonist began his new life/story… - Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
sounds kinda like nerigante armour from monster hunter world
The armor looked similar to Kyren's draconic-humanoid form in a few ways. Metallic black scales and metal covered it while differing sized purple spikes were placed all over its body. Some were in strategic positions like the knee, shoulders, back, and other areas that could be utilized in combat. On top of the head were two horns that shot out front but curved backward. Faint purple veins with a slight glow traveled on any less thick areas, looking comparable in intensity to Dragon's Anger. A large spherical crystal was embedded into the chest that slightly glowed with magic power. There was nothing like eyes or a mouth on the face, just blank and smooth metal, so it seemed impossible to see out of. - Fgs_Chrome1yrCommented
sounds like SAO the one that starts with A. Don't know how to spell it.
Although most of the virtual worlds failed, the ones that worked started producing advanced technologies and ideas at frightening speeds. Monolith hired armies to protect their research, and an independent marketing company to sell their technologies to the major powers of the world. The once small group of geniuses changed their name to the 'Monolith Foundation' and became a large powerhouse in no time at all. - Fgs_Chrome1yrReplied to Shuayeb_Ahmed
- Fgs_Chrome1yrPosted
Honestly, the story was freaking awesome. Read all 82 chaps pretty quickly. The only issue I have is the fact that there are no new chaps being posted. it has such an interesting story line. sure some people might think the MC is op or has hacks but the grand priest has a power level of 969 Googolplex I believe. anyways one Googolplex has a thousand zeroes after the one so yeah food for thought. Anyways the story was awesome and very entertaining. I especially love the romance in it. I don't mean the R-18 content only. I'm interested in seeing who he gets. Im hoping for chronoa, vado, cus, and towa. That's just me though lol. I will definitely recommend this to a friend and hope that the author will make chapters again soon. honestly in my opinion, this story is to good to be abandoned. It's not often I find stories that draw me in. Anyways, I like how he keeps messing up the timeline and can't wait to see what happens to the baka Fu if the author continues this story.
- Fgs_Chrome1yrReplied to Artemis099
I get them mixed up a litty
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