Haven't read it yet but I already read it in the MTL and it was quite good, even though there were grammar mistakes there it was still negligible. Hope this author manages to continue the fanfic since it stopped updating 3 to 4 months ago

Hello for some inexplicable reason, Everytime I try to go to this page it keeps saying that something went wrong with this?

What's the raw name of this fanfic, I'm curious as to what it is and read it in advance But I can't find it, I just hope you could fix the paragraphs since it's a bit uncomfortable for me to read it like that

Can you just finish his gotham evil arc before jumping here, it destroys the tension and enjoyment for me

This story was an amazing read with the adaptations being splendidly done, the writing quality was terrific and hadn't found a single grammar error. The updating stability is a bit bad... But, I understand the reason why and I thank the creator for making this masterpiece before ascending. The designs of the characters are amazing and helped me visualize what they look like without any inconsistencies in their images. The story development was well done, not being overly powerful in an instant and has shown slow progress to the point where he was now.

Amazing is all I'm gonna say, the writing quality is good, the updating stability satisfied me dunno bout the others though, the story development is still early for me to decide but with the current progress I'm sure I'd be amazing. Honestly, the story is good with my current standards. My standards went down due to Wattpad, I can barely find any good stories there as well as here now since it's slowly turning into another Wattpad. Of course the actual stories in Wattpad as well as here are amazing done [I ain't talking bout fanfics]

Bro separated the original 1 chapter into 3 parts

Real relationships hold more value than fictional stories. Don't doubt your worth; and accept the love someone offers. Take the chance to build a genuine connection with the person who proposed to you. Life has both good and bad moments. The tough times make you stronger, and the good times create memories. Treasure those positive memories and live your life to the fullest. Do not be shackled down by your anxiety or nervousness, be brave and just be yourself

If the dead are qualified to be called heroes then the murderers can also be called heroes

The flying thunder god kunai is still in both Konan and Nagato's... Now the question is. Will Konan be able to send a signal before it's too late or will she die before she could send a signal

Uhhhh...okay then, It's nighttime currently so I think I'm just hallucinating this... Yeah totally

Ah yes... The manchilds has showed themselves thinking they are god or something. They must have lots of girlfriends [that cheats on them]

I don't care which direction this one goes. As long as it's good then you better expect me to keep coming back, though I dislike the harem part. I just have to get used to it

You won't be forgotten and she'll be remembered in my history as one of my favorite creators.

While some of the criticism can be ignored, the others such as his grammar need to be improved upon along with his spelling. But your mostly correct, the grammar and spelling mistake can just be fixed with ChatGPT if you're lazy to do it yourself. If he or she listens to everything then some would be dissatisfied with their stories and give their OWN opinions which the Author would listen too which will start a cycle destroying the story. Of course both grammar and spelling mistakes could just be because his first language isn't English.

Gas leak... Seriously? Is this Fate now?

Why Hoshino punch him in the chest? Even a light one would hurt since that's where the MC got stabbed

You better make the chapters long then, because I don't like small chapters that only has 500 to 700+ words only. It feels too short, still. Amazing work as always

Copy paste it before uploading it, that's what I used to do