Mandoline

It's very inconsistent, but I have suspicions that this was either badly written or machine translated from chinese. The names change every few sentences, which is also weird, but the plot itself isn't that bad?

ITS SO WELL WRITTen even though its a oneshot. the plot is very understandable and the dialogue and actions are really funny and good

MEGASUKI?!

NO THE COMMENTS

why was "fuck" censored last chapters haha

ohno

read it as dyson vacuum

oof

Well, the yandere controlling is good because real yandere are well... actually bat-sh*t crazy. Also, the scenes are written great.

YOU KNOW, I CAN TAKE THE POTENTIAL OF MY FIST IN YOUR FACEEE