First of all thanks! For keeping alive my character through your work. Crazy Necromancer in the ruined tower was my first work and I had completely ruined it! There were so many plot holes that by the time I realized it, it wasn't possible to correct them, so I dropped that book. I have been reading Ember's work, he had implemented the world-building of my book, well not only implemented but he had improved it! He is doing a great job, I hope he can write just as good of a novel. Give it a try - you might be surprised!

"I believe in fate" "I am the fate-destroying emperor!" The usage of irony here is very impressive. Coming to the novel, it's a novel with a similar background to that of One Piece, where someone powerful leaves his inheritance, and the younger generation searches for it. Of course, the novel is very different from one piece and I am looking forward to how the author will develop it. First of all, the quality of writing is top-notch, with no grammar mistakes as far as I have seen. The author tends to give much detail about the situation, which although not bad would be better if let for users to imagine... The story is worth a read, give it a try!

Thanks for the review

Hello readers, Author here. Writing a review for your book is never easy because, at the end of the day, it is the readers who decide its fate. Nevertheless, I will give you a brief introduction to my novel. This is a novel that I envisioned for almost 6-8 months. The basic outline of the story is inspired by the game 'Valorant'. The story follows the post-events of First Light, an abnormal phenomenon that changed the world (You will learn about the event and everything else in the novel). This work will be very different from what you guys have read. First of all, there will be multiple leads, both male and female. Secondly, it's not a cliché novel of the protagonist fighting against monsters and such. Romance will be there, but this novel is not going to have incest or Harem. The story will be strictly limited by the boundaries of reality, and I have tried to write it in such a way that you guys could experience the story instead of just reading it. And of course, I am not perfect, so there are bound to be some mistakes, which I would appreciate if you guys could highlight and advise me to improve. Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one chapter every day. The amount may increase in the future, but it depends on a lot of factors. Also, if you guys have any questions, please leave them here; I will answer each one. Finally, I am participating in WSA-2024, so I will shamelessly request you, readers, to give me your power stones....(And also gifts.....(Magic castle (¬_¬) )........ Thank you!

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Good work writing this Author, hope you will not drop it midway.

It was my first work and I dropped it a long time ago as realized there were too many plot holes to edit it. I occasionally log in to the account to read the comments and reviews. So far, My experience was terrible to say it in a good way. It received a lot of criticism which I welcomed to do well in future novels but some readers were....well, let's leave it at that. I just wanted to say that your comment made my day. Thank you

The novel looks good and has potential. We'll see how long the author takes it.

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The story seems historic, a bit different from generic novels these days, let's see how it will be

So far so good

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I do know my mistakes, and It was my first work, my first idea but I didn't know how to tell the story at that time, not that I am any better now, but I am trying to Improve, thanks for the review.

Yeah, he did! I forgot to mention it, I have updated the chapter now.