Review Detail of Cultured_Daoist in Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower

Item: Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower
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Its promising….. IF the author didn’t insert his dam commentary. Its like the author is writing a book about himself telling the story of someone else that they dreamed up. Seems author forgot this novel is about the crazy necromancer, not the author himself talking about his fantasy novel named the crazy necromancer.

Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower

Twilight_Lord

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Twilight_LordAuthorTwilight_Lord

I do know my mistakes, and It was my first work, my first idea but I didn't know how to tell the story at that time, not that I am any better now, but I am trying to Improve, thanks for the review.

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